10 lines
15 min
i spit first good luck
10 lines
15 min
i spit first good luck
u like to talk shit, so staple ur mouth to ur ass
u wanna be like me ,pray to god, and attend mass
ill rip out your heart , now u scared, you can watch it beat
i know my rhymes are way ova replete
ill drill out ur teeth, and rip out ya tounge
it will be doin u a favor, cuz noone likez how u rap son
kill this wannabe mc, ill eat him for breakfast
cut ya body inta layers, jus like a schist
i jus added a definite win to my record
ur rhymes were fragile i stabbed through wit a fencing sword
definitions
1)replete-over satisfaction
2)schist-a rock that can be cut into thin layers
3)fencing sword-a sword rounded at the tip
chekkin
dude ur rhymes need to get delete-ed
mine are tha ones that are over replete-ed
all tha battles u won were cheat-ed
ur a girl so lemme rip out ur fetus
Im schizhophranic so im reapeat this
I dont attend mass cuz im artistic
tha only reason u want my tongue is to lick it
Bambam get beat on, like in tha Flinstones
ima break him down like I would when I use grind-stones
like I sed Ima repeat this go in to contractions while I rip out ur fetus
where tha votes at ppl!!??
uppin, man I wish we could do 2 rounds some times
~1~
not bad yo but why did u rhyme fetus twicce u shouldnt have did that and also can u vote on my battles
yeah I know I messed up..... I only have 65 posts man can u vote on mine against Come Get it??oh wait now 66
this battle was kindof weak but bam had more punches no disrespect rile 1
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
oh my god u voted for the wrong guy wat a fuckin dick head u shoukdnt really have a vote
weak battle
bambam -kinda almost had punches but it was mostly self gory
rile1- really bad, incosintint adn u rimed fetus twice... with the same line
vote bb cus the ohter guy really sucked
sole winner bam bam wit mor punches
bam bam won this battle for 1 simple reason. Dude was feeding off his lyric's too much. U gotta come original homie. U shouldnt have to re write your opponents verse to beat him. so because of that u lost sorry homie. Besides your verse was wack and half of it was already writtin.
V/ BamBam
TO ALL VOTERS...... Please fully explain your pulls "I want real feedback".
Thats why I'm here. I wanna know what u LIKE and what u DONT like so I can better addapt to the vibe of the people "U feel me". I'm trying to perfect my lyrics and graduate to higher level "So I would appreaciate a FULLY EXPLAINED VOTE". Explain both opponents not just mine niether it's not just about me.
THANKYOU
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dis was a weak battle but bambam definetly won it 4 mo structure
bam bam took this one wit better flow and punchlines....... rile1 u could have stepped it up way more then u did
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