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    Before Eden

    My life is based on, a war thats raged on..
    profound thoughts mixed with scorching napalm..
    Teachers and prophets, all burned and forgotten..
    even the wheels of time are turnin and plottin..
    Blasphamous statements leavin truth trapped in a basement..
    it's amazing what a person can do with there back to the pavement..

    I'm God's messenger, carrying papyrus stained with ink..
    a child born of a virgin, and I'm here to name the king..
    He would be called "Lucifer", an angel of past, present and future..
    dangerous but beautiful, like two platinum gold lugers..
    charismatic and witty, people couldn't help but love him..
    but his growing power was stirring up problems above him..
    people were lookin to lucifer to answer there prayers..
    God wasn't an option..and nobody really cared..
    so God grew jealous, full of hatred and envy..
    and as time turned on, his anger grew plenty..
    He took lucifers life, and cast him up to the sky..
    and all the angels under God were wondering why..
    Lucifer was a good man, strong devout christian..
    and when he spoke of God, everyone listened..
    But Lucifer questioned no one, and accepted his place..
    as God's left hand man, a warlord with armor and mace..
    He would be commander of angels, a valiant soldier of God..
    and the book of genesis was a chosen facade..
    all the angels of heaven, equipped with flaming swords..
    were cast down to the earth, to become lame and whores..
    Now it was just Lucifer and God, and the assumption shot in..
    If Lucifer was to detrhone, there was no stoppin him..
    Too prideful to destroy any creation, he cast him down aswell..
    and Lucifer was so confused, he vowed to make life living hell..
    the sins of the world, don't trace back to an ~~~~~ core eaten..
    all of our trials and tribulations started way before eden..
    and Satan was to reign over the earth, and open the gates of hell..
    Known as the garden of eden, the place where satan fell..


    I Told ya'll Niggas i'm bringin tha truth....uppin

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    Thought the title sounded familiar.
    Are you "Braille"?
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=183199
    Last edited by CrazyCarl; May 16th, 2005 at 09:14 PM

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    its brayle..but yea it's me and my brother..i dont ever get on it any more..he does tho

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    yo Chron...that waz nice ...felt u on dis man....nice metas in there.....u gon make an audio???

    get at me if u gonna cuz if u didnt write this to a beat ill hook ya upp...ight

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    Tru...Uppin 4 more

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    uppin..........................................

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    Your a motherfucker, because that is plagiarism right there...

    The guy who wrote that is not you, he is known as In-Vision at RapVerse and I know him from another board too and he knows me...

    Fuck you for biting...

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    chronic cancer..you are a piece of shit...first you bite my shit...than you claim theres two people in a group that fucks up the name..it isn't fucking brayle..it's braille bitch...get the shit right...rot in hell
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    I remember when Braille first appeared on the scene, we were all kids and we were in awe of the greying beard and wisdom.

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