10 lines 45 mins
check in an spit
g'd luck
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10 lines 45 mins
check in an spit
g'd luck
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check
y is ya name 1/2 crook wat do u do take shit and give it back..
comon dawg u know that alll your shit is wack..
after this battle ill be surprised if u even write back..
cuz rite now dawg im comin wit a full attack..
showin u wats good .. comin straight outta tha hood ..
im straight outta compton wit a cold heart..
the only thing u see is bold art..
ur like mj back in tha day ..sitin on the bench at the park pickin out the next kid u gunna inpreganate..
and rite now im spittin with straight hate..
cuz u a fuckin little queer bate..
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BITCH
God's soldier won't stand up to me, while blessin with rhymes -- 1
Cuz u'll probably slip off a cloud or somethin if stepped outta line -- 2
keepin this shit simple and plain, without prolongin this beatin' -- 3
You've Gotta be Dreamin, God's soldiers?...all belong in his penis --- 4
You had better come correct, or will probably get dropped for sure -- 5
Your style seems to keep elevatin, has just forgot the floor -- 6
Get...popped some more, at first may seem a bit startled -- 7
This Guy couldn't rock the floor, if his grill was sheer marble -- 8
Besides...I didn't really need 45 mins, just tried to even the o.d.d.s -- 9
So PussY don't -O.D. from D.ick S.uckin-, and just keep on Your job 10!
pZ
i fucked around and posted this in bitch slapped too
lol......uppin 4 votes yo................................................
lol.....Yeah uppin for honest votes
no crew votes!!!
Soldier - Saying that all his shit is wack is about as basic and boring as it gets. You gotta come harder and more creative than that. Your shit wasn't harsh at all like saying all he sees is art? Uh ok man, whatever. Work on being harsh. Read some battles from good dudes around here and see how to do this.
Crookz - Don't number your lines man, that's wack as fuck. That god's soldier's penis line was aight, but could have been better like this.
This dude sucks, he's a sick fuck, seriously bad cards he was dealt
He sleeps dreaming of God's Soldiers...well of what's below the belt
Could be even better, but that's more direct than the way you wrote it and harsher.
Either way, your verse wasn't as boring and more harsh so you take this.
Vote - Crook
u vote on everybattle agaist me ur a hater
Spend more time working on your punches and less time whining.
I vote on a lot of battles. There's only a few people I got beef with and those people I don't vote for. You fucking lost man, take it like a man and elevate.
Dis Battle Was Real Wack No Disrespect But G Solgia Had More Punches Rdf
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
hell naw..u cant vote thats a crew vote..fuckkin fags gtfoh
a crew vote ?.. hes in da navy and ima lyrical assasin idiot
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Damn!!...it's a fuckin epidemic...I've seen my share of sum wack battles 2day.....Soldier...your rap seemed to short and no punches...way too basic...Halfway came halfway decent...so he git's my vote.
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