Zonin

[P.Status™]

ZONIN
I’m the most vicious , I dethrone bitches faster than you can throw switches /
still known as one of the most sickest, I'll uphold the witness if the judge misses (oh!) /
You're in no position to openly hold these visions /
I'll show you a pose that got you froze like motion sickness /
I’ll Unload a clip through ya whole division and dispose of my victims, my smithens spoke with a quick tick tick and a hiss /
I won't miss, I’m on the road to riches, I lay on a cold shoulder with my pockets bulging /
heat up the spot, I speak through a box, even when I speak at my weakest degree its the least you got in stock /
my regime is to be seen, intervene between the highest degree like a beam triggered above ya spleen /
I can deplete feigns In teams, I intrigue you to speak of my demean, but only in ya dreams can I be seen /
I’m serene to scenes when I breeze, though I’m foreseen as misdeemed to emcee's /
My defiance strike's violence through science at these hip hop icons, but I don't rely on my alliance to contrive my primeness /
P shines to blind ya minds iris and the theory I define lye’s between the lines I rhyme in /
these envisions couldn't begin to contradict the sickness I’m spitten as long as the earths spinnin /
Many have risen from competition, other's who tried have died witnessing these incisions /
The conflictions I impact on cause strong infliction so it'd be smart to keep distance /
My long arm division's barred from derision in frivolous dispositions /
Though I hold my highest regards to those in prison, Imposed by their own decisions /



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[Mr.President]

I liked you rhymes,but I wasn't really feelin the flow,some nice punches in there too,but next time please post in a bigger font and please stay with the original color,makes it alot easier to read.

[2hot2handle]

It was good. The rhymes were creative but make the font bigger please and fix the structure better. I liked how you used more rhymes in the middle of sentences but some words i didnt know what they meant. Goodjob but damn please make it easier to read.

[Judge Judy]

Pretty nice lines.....But you seriously need to fix your structure dude.....Your current structure just is run on sentences, and i think you should make a better one.....Make them line up..

Keep elevating.