User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 14 of 14

Thread: Like a pro

  1. #1
    Banned
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Posts
    5,480
    Battle Record
    12-1

    Like a pro

    (chorus x 3)
    I do this rap shit like a mutha fuckin pro
    everytime i rap people say"way to go!"
    they all say that i have a great flow
    like a pro.....fo sho fo sho.....

    (verse 1)
    i fight and murder like a pro
    i fight fast you fight real slow
    this game has a pro player, me
    in basketball i have the jersey numba 23
    if you come to my game then you'll see
    that i am a pro to stay and be
    like a pro is a key to success
    after you see me.. you relize im the best
    i got my team name stitched on my chest
    after you get blown away be all my talent
    in 1 on 1 i neva lost.. peeps think i have ... but i havent
    i play this agme like a pro not like a starter
    the only thing i'm not a pro is the best farter
    shit dont matter to me only to be greatest
    my practices run till 10 at the latest
    i have the pro talent to be a priest
    my talent rises like baking yiest
    my talent is 99 at the least
    when i play like a pro i'm like a beast

    (chorus x 3)
    I do this rap shit like a mutha fuckin pro
    everytime i rap people say"way to go!"
    they all say that i have a great flow
    like a pro.....fo sho fo sho.....

    (verse 2)
    i play basketball like a pro.... my best talent is when i dribble
    on this open mic rap site my gangster username is skibble
    like a pro is the greatest you can be
    all you know that i'm a P.I.M.P
    and soon to be the MVP
    the most valuable player
    i am so good i'm like the mayor
    like a pro.....i do so many things so good
    i am even a pro at takin control of the hood
    after people think i am cheatin they hate me
    but all the girls think i'm hot and want to date me
    i can drive like a pro.. and i got paid for it
    knock-knock-knock on the door shit
    like a pro is all i can say man
    and all the men dotn give a damn
    all the girls think i am real hot
    and right now on the list im at the top
    and i am gonna rise non stop

    (chorus x 3)
    I do this rap shit like a mutha fuckin pro
    everytime i rap people say"way to go!"
    they all say that i have a great flow
    like a pro.....fo sho fo sho.....

  2. #2

  3. #3
    Newbie Kanada's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    Posts
    18
    Battle Record
    0-1
    hummm.........the rhymes were well thought out the topic was ok..... could be better...... the flow was alright too....... keep elevating and also improving.. keep it up and good job..... also the strcure was good too...... .............
    -Kanada

  4. #4
    Newbie Ciccone's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    Location
    Billerica
    Age
    35
    Posts
    44
    Niceee. awesome flow...great structure... u really outdid ur self this time <<<<< one of mah favorites yet!!!!!!!!!!!!! i kant wait to see more from u because u have hilariuos raps and wicked funny topics.... keep it up keep elavating awesome job on this one kid

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  5. #5
    BEST topical writer... Endeva.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    N.E.England
    Posts
    8,020
    Battle Record
    34-10
    Awards OM WOTM SS HOF SS HW Champion OM HOF 25+ Wins
    i thought it had a decent flow, but thought some of the lines were a bit short, could have done with evening it out a bit to improve it, the content seemed a bit plain tho, overall, ok, but what do i know... see ya
    [youtube]99ns8n2S40g[/youtube]

  6. #6
    Banned
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Posts
    5,480
    Battle Record
    12-1
    thx for the feed uppin

  7. #7
    Banned
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Posts
    5,480
    Battle Record
    12-1
    uppin^^^

  8. #8
    ... Dark Knight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    Location
    Darkness
    Posts
    74
    Battle Record
    2-2
    not bad this was real creative and i liked the rhymes...nice flow... great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    overall 8.5/10.... the strcure was ok....
    the topic was good..............
    nice job...keep it up
    keep improving too

  9. #9
    Vertikle
    Guest
    not your best but a decent piece.......some lines were too short and didn't flow that well....but you stayed on topic and used good rhymes to bounce off of that and make this piece decent.....good job and keep dropping dawg.......7/10.........pz ~1~

  10. #10
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    VA
    Age
    35
    Posts
    95
    this piece was very structured and i loved the flow , it has potential , keep working tho im sure you can make better pieces in the future.........[IMG]













    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=205921[/IMG]

  11. #11
    You've Earned a Custom Title! The Vortex's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    here and there
    Posts
    3,288
    Battle Record
    28-5
    nice format and tite flow fosho ... looks real good.. some lines cudda be a lil longer as they seemed to stop short.

    i think verse 2 was the best....
    overall you could of elaborated on the basketball a bit more for flavour.

    1 up fosho
    .................................................. ......................

  12. #12
    Banned
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Posts
    5,480
    Battle Record
    12-1
    iight thanks for the feed man..... uppin this 1

  13. #13
    Assassin
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    Location
    Chicago
    Age
    35
    Posts
    37
    Battle Record
    1-1
    this drop i really liked how you told about ya self and how your a pro but youi cant be good at everything homie... anywayz the rhymes weer good and the flow was iight.....the strcure was iight too..... the topic was koool and the tittle was interesting and it caught my eye... good job..keep it up

  14. #14
    Newbie
    Join Date
    Jun 2005
    Location
    billerica
    Age
    36
    Posts
    6
    i agree with FSK....... the rhymes werew good and everything esle he said i tottally agree with... good job here... keep it up and keep elevatig and improve as well... ytour still very well but the only thing i dont agree with is i think this is a 7.5/20 sorry this could be better

Similar Threads

  1. Replies: 0
    Last Post: October 29th, 2006, 08:38 AM
  2. logic pro vs pro tool hd ( need help quickly)
    By babegurl148 in forum The Studio
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: May 9th, 2006, 07:58 AM
  3. Replies: 81
    Last Post: November 28th, 2005, 06:59 PM
  4. Cool Edit Pro 2.0 Vs. Acid Pro 4.0
    By TheCrave in forum The Studio
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: September 6th, 2004, 11:30 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •