Cigars & Guitars

[Issue]

Cigars & Guitars.
I don't smoke and I can't hold a rhythym.
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Watch this puff of smoke...............
From the cigar.
Listen to me drop a note................
On this guitar.
...I don't smoke and I can't hold a rhythym,
Broke. just another victim lost in 'the system.'
This joke that I exist in this life I am living.
...I don't smoke and I can't hold a rhythym,
I just hope that with this, I can get you to listen...
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I follow as you walk, you swallow as I talk.
I wallow where you stalk... Hollow, I am forced...
I'm Puppet Mastered.
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I call myself a citizen but really I'm just a villain,
Omnipotent in this system of militant simpletons.
A victim of the dividends of historical ignorance.
Infinite in my innocence,
But cynically suicidal in this pit I call importance.
Impotent to this whorage of cordial accordance,
Bordering escape from this forced fortress of ordinence.
Being applauded by the audience,
With my aura of humanity utterly shattered.
Being hung drawn and quarted by their laughter,
Feeling puppet mastered.
Seeing other bastards orphaned by disaster,
Caused by the allure of 'happily ever after.'
Course after course... Chapter by chapter...
We're brought up to believe vanity'll be our capture,
Mirrors are 7 years of evil if we dare shatter,
A disease so decitful we chatter to its capter,
Face to face with our own Puppet Master.
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I fell asleep last night, what did I miss?
...It really had to come to this?
When I slept it was bliss, dreams really do exist!
Dismissed any risk of the abyss,
...Sit and reminisce and hit fists with the kids.
I listed the wishes I visited and the kisses I recieved from my sisters.
My wrists were blistered with the mist of roses.
My lips where whispering quips admist this bonus,
I took hold of the moment and said I'd never let go of it.
Then woke with a coldness feeling so lonesome and hopeless,
Being phony and bogus, un-noticed, unfocused.
Devoted as to why God soaked us in this moat of desperation.
Why he clothed us in this coat of exageration?
And why he knows that were locusts lost in infestation,
And still he leaves us to cope with this pain alone,
Not knowing where we're going, immune to our destination.
Impatiently running from place to place,
Hastely having fun! Wasting this life!
What's done is done right?
So I'll cry myself back to sleep again tonight.
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I'll fight my way back into sight of these dreams,
I'll enlighten everyday with playful screams,
I'll heighten the resistance of those set for existense,
I'll postition myself where I've never been.
I'll envision myself back into this dream.
I'll stealthly rewrite history, become a wealthy mystery.
An eccentic eclectic with health and a dynasty.
I'll get everyone to kiss me, and feel good that they miss me.
I'll visually create a defence of hate,
A fence and a gate to negate the walls of reality.
Then I'll wake and gently mistake this fate for my sanity,
Happily ever after questioning why the fuck it came to this?!
I fell asleep last night, what did I miss?!
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Watch this puff of smoke...............
From this cigar.
Listen to me drop a note................
On this guitar.
...I don't smoke and I can't hold a rhythym.
I'm just a victim.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=210528
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=210571
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Read passed the font, copy and paste it sumwer an make it bigger if you will...
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Buy R.Kelly
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Upppppp......

[Issue]

Wow, sleep for a few hours.


Do i risk upp'n this or just leaving it?!

[Johnny 6-feet]

Wow, wow, wow...Tell me you're making this into an audio man. God, where do i start? First off, the topic was great, the imagery you created, the complexity of the rhymes and the strength of the vocab were all on point. The hook was good, the multi's were good. It was just a dope piece from start to finish. Way to show the newbies Issue!!

Hit n Run, you fuckers!

[Kalos Graphē]

wow, that was my faveroite shit of yours yet issue, real dope man awesome! the flow was great, and i really liked the rhymes, like i always do... haha, vocab... i had no clue wut the fuck u were talking about, that shit was way beyond my dictionary dude... haha i could tell it was good, even tho i didnt understand ne of it... neways u had alot of emotion in there, that was sum Edgar Allen shit right there man, genious... the hook was ok, ur not really good at hooks but oh well that verse was insane so that's all that matters i guess... mayb work on the hook abit, otherwise this was tha bomb... my fav ive seen frum u yet issue... good job... big fan man im a big fan... keep postin and c ya

sorry it wasnt that great of a feed but its hard 2 drop feed with u cuz everytime im just repeating myself

[MastamindM80]

damn bro complexity all over......i like it lmao

[Ads]

yeah i really liked this too....i dont read much OM's or do many OM's, but from what ive read this is a pretty nice verse, hook was dope, both verses i liked, rhyme shceme was good, the complexity was CrAzY i liked it, structure was ok not bad...the imagiry was there too, ive never played guitar but i used to be a smoker so yeah lol...

...overall not bad at all i really liked this peice, keep it up man i look forward to see you droping more OM's like this.

[JoT jOnEz]

yea man that shit was str8 piff crack nah heroin b i loved that shit the rhyms every thing structure u got it b///

[Issue]

Thanks to the people who left more than 1 line feed, Johnny an Ta2.

Upppppppppp, I would like to see this nominated Lol, :P

[blunt minded]

Standard Issue?

[Issue]

...the fuck?

Upp

[Xdicy]

this was nice as hell..i dont no what the significents was of i dont smoke and cant hold a rythm but this whole verse was my favorit...

I call myself a citizen but really I'm just a villain,
Omnipotent in this system of militant simpletons.
A victim of the dividends of historical ignorance.
Infinite in my innocence,
But cynically suicidal in this pit I call importance.
Impotent to this whorage of cordial accordance,
Bordering escape from this forced fortress of ordinence.
Being applauded by the audience,
With my aura of humanity utterly shattered.
Being hung drawn and quarted by their laughter,
Feeling puppet mastered.
Seeing other bastards orphaned by disaster,
Caused by the allure of 'happily ever after.'
Course after course... Chapter by chapter...
We're brought up to believe vanity'll be our capture,
Mirrors are 7 years of evil if we dare shatter,
A disease so decitful we chatter to its capter,
Face to face with our own Puppet Master.

like whoa...that was nice man i got some stuff similer if u ever want to hook up and do an audio or some thing hit me up.....

[Issue]

Its more like contradicting and stuff, I dont know... You each decypher what you want it to mean. I actually wrote it with an acoustic beat to my head, something coutry lol....... Hmm,

- Peace

[JAY DOT.]

I like the concept. I read the whole thing and it gives me a feeling of joy. Good work homie.

[YoungHusla]

Dope drop man, I really liked it it was complexity up to my neck. Kinda like a nursery rhyme.Your vocab was also very good, and your flow was ILL, PM me when you make this into audio man.

[Issue]

Nope, no audio.


Uppppp