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Thread: Freestyle Is The Sport..

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    dreadedfistofthenorthwest
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    Freestyle Is The Sport..

    Freestyle is the sport I play,
    say this rap phenom cant spit ish any other way,
    cause when its free, its a new era,
    cause when its free, its like the new world terror,
    errors is just a mistake they can be corrected,
    like me busten down wack mcees, now I believe Im respected,
    check this, when the verse step in, and you spittin a written,
    the real can tell, cause the writtens are just things to expell,
    suspend in the air once a freestyle starts, and it is bright enough to light up the neighbourhood parks,
    spot the marks and shoot lyrical darts, cart the wack to the cremetory for spittin dark,
    my raps are now sharpened, and every word said the herd will follow,
    so will the nomads, no man can step into the darkness, a sharp kiss,
    isnt to be taken lightly, cause heartless emcees dont wanna fight me,
    start this lyrical spark an this, mystical path to unleash an mcees wrath,
    Im tired of emcees spittin wack,
    so they gotta pull the stack of paper taped to there back,
    and start hittin it real, cause to be steel in the rap mystism,
    you have to know something, and you have to be able to spit to rhythm..

    honest feed.
    The R.
    -The Illest Ever Kid-

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    The flow was decent, parts seemed repetitive. It didnt reall appeal to me but keep droppin man...

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    You need to post two links, to two OMs you left decent feedback on, or this gets closed, thanks.
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    The R.
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    pretty boring honestly. try to find a deeper topic and express shit to it. your flow was alright, but the material was just boring. keep dropping though.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    Nope. Need to leave more feed than that. Take your time.

    Closed.
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