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  1. July 26th, 2005, 05:40 PM #31
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    you need to switch up your vocab more..and a littl elvation to it as well.your wrodplay could have been more intricate....your imagery was tight...and your pice flowed pretty nicley...your bars would flow better if they were a littl shorter...keep droppin .~1~


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  2. July 27th, 2005, 07:30 PM #32
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  3. July 29th, 2005, 04:01 PM #33
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  4. July 29th, 2005, 04:26 PM #34
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    your words went together well.. Maybe shorten your flow up a little bit. Ive never felt the centered shit.. I think it throws the structure out.. but overall good piece man
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  5. July 30th, 2005, 10:59 PM #35
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  6. July 31st, 2005, 06:15 PM #36
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  8. August 1st, 2005, 09:27 PM #38
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    yeah that was pretty tight... how long u been doing this..... i thought ya words were so descriptive
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  9. August 1st, 2005, 09:41 PM #39
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    Damn man nice piece, really tells a story.
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    7/10 Keep at it man that was real good.
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