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  1. August 4th, 2005, 04:30 PM #1
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    How lyfe can turn

    Yo life and death the line is very thin
    Cause when u die u neva come back again
    Some nigga don't care if they right now
    Then 2 min later here come the 40 cal
    But me lyfe is wut I cherrish wit my all
    Cause right no I don't wanna take a fall
    Lyfe to good got much luv out here
    Until that day the cops pulled up in the rear
    I know I waz fucked up the moment it happened
    Two cases of cocaine in the trunk of my G-wagon
    He said son put ur hands where on the wheel
    I knew already I should press the gas and peel
    He told me to pop the truck I said fuck no
    The I press the gas them here come three more popos
    Damn I fuck up I resisting arrest
    Next then I know got nightstick in my chest
    They gave me 10 to 15 yr to rot in my cell
    So I said fuck that I'm give out when they ring the bell
    Then bell rung took a cops gun I run as fast as I can
    Ran got on this bitch nigga shot me in the hand
    Dropped the pistol it hit the floor on the spot
    I keep runnin I could go back to that cell to rot
    Ran straight to my dog house turned on the new
    My face on there shottin a cop wit that 22
    5 min later cops say open up the door
    So they bustin in said put ur hand on the floor
    I fuck up I waz suppose to go to college a yr from now
    Turn around looked down the barrel of a 40 cal(Bloww)
    My life is done it game ova I dead
    Have an open casket funeral wit a bullet in my head
    Tell all yall now live ur life up now or ur next on the list
    The list of niggas who don't listen to this
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  2. August 4th, 2005, 04:30 PM #2
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  3. August 4th, 2005, 05:05 PM #3
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  4. August 4th, 2005, 05:14 PM #4
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    tight rhymes homie, flow and structure was good good be betta but still it is dope
    i see you have rap talent, topic was kool, nice job on picking the topic......vocab could be used in this more, but this drop is still tight, good job, keeep it up, and keep droppin..overall 8.6/10
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  5. August 4th, 2005, 05:15 PM #5
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  6. August 4th, 2005, 05:19 PM #6
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    eazy, this was hot... the flo was kinda off but i loved it! word[lay coulda been a lil better but all in all, this was the shit.. and check out my shit on here called feelins in the heart aight 1
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  7. August 4th, 2005, 05:20 PM #7
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  8. August 4th, 2005, 05:38 PM #8
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  9. August 4th, 2005, 05:43 PM #9
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    deep shit man i wuz feeling it lost flow couple times but its cool wuz well recovered
    could of used more multis and have a stronger vocab other than that good job man

    check out my newest piece out Silvery Roads
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  10. August 4th, 2005, 05:52 PM #10
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  11. August 4th, 2005, 05:58 PM #11
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    yeah i'm feelling what peaches saying
    over all this piece is iight just not tight.
    wording i felt could been more visual
    flow felt like being on a river boat, rocky
    but your line structure held me down
    uuuuumm I say 6/10

    holla backk at your boy on your next drop.
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  12. August 4th, 2005, 06:00 PM #12
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    PRetty tight rhymes, i liked the piece, but you said some shit over, and it was a little elementary, lost flow a couple times, missed a few words, but you did pretty good.....7.5/10

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  13. August 4th, 2005, 06:04 PM #13
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