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whoa.... this whole battle was hot as hell ta me... i liked both verses good job both... ya'll both had a good structure, both verses had strong punches in a way, ya'll both didnt speak about ya'll self all lik most ppl.. but kioni won this battle, hit way harder and his verse's flo was tight... punches was better even tho other dude had good ones
vote/ki
i got to go wit my nigga peve his was funnier had more punches and made since.
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This waz a good battle
Punches Koini
Flow Koini
Structure tie
wordplay Koini
vocab not much vocab
v/Koini for mainly overall better
fuck u trick u aint gangsta,..ha ah da nigas name, Pev,
niga please, u aint a threat, lik fat joe, hav this niga lean back wit ease,
me puttin 2 pistols in ya rib cage, is da only way fa u ta spit bullets,
da niga soft, cant handle a 12 year old who neva hesitate ta pull it,
.ha ah.........ha shit im Kodak, givin dis niga face shots,
niga wont even b hood rich if, Mannie freash stood wit coupons on his block,
make him go bank rupt lik mc hammer, yo watch me kill him in da next line,
take apart his legs, an cut his fade in 2, break him dwn lik Hammer time,
VS.
yo, check this, here you talking bout guns, and stabin me threw the chess
Yo mothafucka ILL jack that pistol out of your hands and kill you, see if I care less
You got me fucking waiting here at least an hour and a half
What the fuck mitsu, ya only come up wit dat? (shit)
IM a GOD!, Flip those letters around and you GOT yourself, you SHITSSU
Kioni - I liked your verse, your flow was smooth man. the punches were connecting left an right. the complexity of the structure was set up nice man. i liked the creativity in this piece. out of ten id give you 8.5.
Pet - Your verse was pretty ill also. the flow was set up nice but needed minor elevation. the punches were connecting but just not as hard. the complexity the alright and the structure needed minor improvement. if out of 10 7.5
v/ kioni...
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fuck u trick u aint gangsta,..ha ah da nigas name, Pev,
niga please, u aint a threat, lik fat joe, hav this niga lean back wit ease,
me puttin 2 pistols in ya rib cage, is da only way fa u ta spit bullets,
da niga soft, cant handle a 12 year old who neva hesitate ta pull it,
.ha ah.........ha shit im Kodak, givin dis niga face shots,
niga wont even b hood rich if, Mannie freash stood wit coupons on his block,
make him go bank rupt lik mc hammer, yo watch me kill him in da next line,
take apart his legs, an cut his fade in 2, break him dwn lik Hammer time,
VS.
yo, check this, here you talking bout guns, and stabin me threw the chess
Yo mothafucka ILL jack that pistol out of your hands and kill you, see if I care less
You got me fucking waiting here at least an hour and a half
What the fuck mitsu, ya only come up wit dat? (shit)
IM a GOD!, Flip those letters around and you GOT yourself, you SHITSSU
This waz a good battle..................my voting scheme
Punches-K
Flow-K
Structure-both
wordplay-K
vocab-none
ohhhh/ahhh factor-k
V/K
Artificial Intelligence
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