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Thread: What's Beef?

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    Apostle OS
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    What's Beef?

    What's beef?

    Beef's when you think about another man like a bitch,
    Big behind rhymes, but you've only seen it ina flick,
    you callin dude a faggot, well get off his dick,
    we lost MC's to rappers, like we turned the game to tricks.

    How many busters in here can break dance?
    Graffitti a tag, or know where the base of Hip-Hop stands?
    Kurtis Blow, a rappin Marvin Gaye,
    Cats are singin O.P.P. not knowin what they say.

    You's a poser, you're lucky I don't hit you wit the dozer,
    put your whack mind to sleep, cause fake lines is weak.
    I'm hearin the same murder rhymes each week,
    can't count how many threats they slept and said they'd keep.

    I remember back to the side ways hats, and the shell toes,
    I used to clown so much I could smell hoes, a mile away,
    I got the same style today,
    I'ma make a few differences while they play.

    It ain't notin like the O.ld S.chool,
    from D. Dandridge to Queens Bridges, Nas,
    Pac back down to Drifters,

    A B-Boy wanna be, boy I'm jus good at it,
    Fuck the money stackin,
    shit don't get it twisted, I gotta Cadi in mind,
    but I'll leave the fatty behind to show the way God first designed it.

  2. #2
    Apostle OS
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    uppin uppin uppin

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    Tha Burnin Sensation 2hot2handle's Avatar
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    You need to elevate. The rhymes were too simplistic and the structure was off. I get the message but the flow was off and ya need to set it up better but keep writin and keep goin at it.

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    View this from last year^

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    yes...i was feelin your topic...but you should elevate tha way you deliever it...elevate your wordplay and rhyme scheme and your vocab...all in all this piece could have been better...keep elevatin and droppin.!~1~


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