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Thread: The time we spent on earth [Freaky Zeke feat Mista Grim]

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    The time we spent on earth [Freaky Zeke feat Mista Grim]

    Freaky Zeke
    The time we spent here is presious like a diamond
    Wut I do to past my time is doin my rythmin
    U need to make life the best cause u livin to die
    Cause u need to do everything right now u might not get to say bye
    I make my time on earth worth it by doin everything
    I do the worst things u can think of and some good things
    Yo i've did some dirty thing in my life time
    But wut reflects my life is the way I rythme
    If u think u know Freaky Zeke u don't know half of it
    Niggas don't know Zeke they only know the punches I hit
    Me and my nigga Grim got split personalitys
    Ya'll don't know anything about us this reality
    Only god can judge us and we not gonna let ya'll niggas put us down
    Even tho anyway one day we gonna wind up in the ground
    Ya'll only know me from my rappin and rythmin
    Ya'll niggas neva saw me in the moments that I been shynin
    Wut u need to do is wuteva u want to do right now
    Cause u neva know some if u'll wake up tommorrow or be in the ground
    It waz a time when even Zeke thought that his life came so a stop
    I waz tryin to dodge bullets then I got dropped
    In the E.R breathin in a differentway and blood all ova my body
    Then seein that big hole from the impact of that shotty
    But I made in through so ya'll remeber this verse
    When u in anything it can always turn to the worse
    U need to do it up and make it wut it's worth
    Cause u don't know the time u spent on earth

    MISTA GRIM
    SINCE I BEEN HERE ON THIS EARTH I'VE REALIZED SOME FACTS/NOT TOO MANY GOT YA BACK/MY GOAL IS A PLATINUM PLAQUE/AS I CONTINUE TO KNOCK 'EM BACK/I'M ON THE PATH TO SUCCESS SO WHO WILL I CRUSH NEXT/ME AND ZEKE BREAK NECKS/ SO PAY YA RESPECTS AND LOOK AT IT FROM DIFFERENT ASPECTS/I FLIP THE SCRIPT TAKE A LOOK THROUGH THE REFLECTION/I'VE EXPERIENCED ONLY THE FIRST SECTION OF THE LESSON/FIRST OF I STARTED AS A YOUNG BOY TRYIN' TO HANG WIT THE BIG NIGGAS/ALL I WANTED WAS SWORDS AND CAP GUNS TO PULL TRIGGAS/THEN I GOT OLDER, SITTIN IN MATH CLASS ADDIN' THE FIGGAS/NOW I'M HIGH SCHOOL BUT THE NIGGAS IS BIGGA/I'VE ALWAYS WISHED TO BE AT THE TOP/TO BE POPULAR AND JUST WON'T STOP/GOT THE FRESH NEW GEAR AT MALL ALREADY IN STOCK/STEP UP AND GET KNOCKED/ I'M SERVIN UP GAME/MY JOB IS JOB TO SHOW SOME THANGS TO LAMES/ THEY SQUARE AS MY BACK POCKETS, BUT THAT AIN'T GONNA CHANGE/SO FOR NOW JUST SAY THAT I REARRANGED THE GAME/SPICED IT UP/ LIGHTED IT UP/ I REALLY DON'T GIVE A FUCK/SO ONE GOOD THING I'VE DONE SO FAR WHILE I BEEN LIVIN'/IS THAT MADE SOMETHIN OUT OF THE SHIT THAT I WAS GIVEN/
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    decent drop a lil drawn out and flow was off in parts...
    but overall it was a good drop....
    upp the vocab as well
    :.Apollo .:

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    stay up and keep elevatin...
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    Thanx Again Yall

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    topic was average..ive seen it done better....mista grimms structure was all fucked up..dont structure your piece like a pragraph....structure it like the first cat...elevate your wordplay and vocab as well..average topic..average verses....elevate more...check out my piece titled Corrupt Authority...id appreciate it.~1~


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