now this song isnt finished. im having hard time tryna see what the hook and shit to be so when or if you read this i would love to hear some ideas or comments that yall might have you figadeal me. even if this shit sucks to you just holla back and let the girl know
verse 1
I THINK THAT ITS TIME THAT WE GET AWAY TOGETHER
TROPICAL DRINKS SANDY BEACHES AND NICE WEATHER
GETTIN LOST IN OUR LIL ENDEVOR
AND WISH THIS MOMENT HERE COULD LAST FOREVER
STAY AT A 5 STAR TELLY WHILE WE HERE
ALL THIS FOR YOU JUST TO SHOW YOU THAT I REALLY CARE
BATH TUB FILLED WITH WARM WATER AND ROSE PEDDLES
GOT LINGERIE LAID OUT ON THE BED FOR YA ALL EATABLE
PUT YOU IN THE TUB AND WASH OFF THE SAND
IM LIKE DESTINY'S CHILD IM TRYNA CATER 2 MY MAN
LAID BACK CHILLIN DRINKIN THIS CRYSTALL
THINKIN BOUT ALL THE THINGS WE BOUT TO DO IN A LIL WHILE
MAKE LOVE ON THE BEACH WHILE I STARE INTO YOUR EYES
WE LOST IN OUR THOUGHTS WATCHIN THE SUN RISE
OK I WOULD LIKE SOME FEED BACK ON THIS. THANK YOU IF YOU TOOK THE TIME OUT TO READ IT. MUCH LOVE.