CoMe WiTh HoTNesS
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Jay Says...
Nas's_Youngest
CoMe WiTh HoTNesS
12-16 lines
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or Dick Rydin,
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Yes Sirr, my chekkk
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aiight hurry up and drop some stuff
u feminine like JULIET couldnt get props if u was a MOVIE SET
the only time u cuttin the raw is if u was a SUSHI CHEF
dog ya TEXTS WEAK, my advice: ya BEST CEASE
u couldnt win if u time traveled to steal a verse i'd write NEXT WEEK
like a SPLIFF FROM THE BUDDAH when i spit CLIPS FROM THE RUGERS
ya rhymes is the stupidest shit i've heard since is it CHICKEN OR TUNA?
bitch cuz ur whole SET'S RETARDED" you dealin wit the BEST OF SARGEANTS
who could have two pumps to ya chest like a homemade BREAST ENLARGEMENT
I'm CRAZY, GIVE ME ROOM who can SAVE YOU FROM THE DOOM?
I seen your friends you're surrounded by pussy like a BABY IN THE WOMB
son, im damaging ur FEAR LOOKS, fag style and QUEER HOOKS
cuz u got less chance of gettin signed than a retarded kid's YEAR BOOK!
Chicago Stand Up, We're doing bigger and better things
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hol up, quiet, he bout to speak...
...nevermind, i forgot nobody gives a fuck about wat jay says,
ill conquer pyramids of ancient aztec lines, like hernan cortez,
Imma try n help u out, 1st let go of my verse...,
...then everybody'll rejoice cause u finally droppin fire,
u cant approach lines, touch em n get cut ^ like barbed-wire,
when u chose 2 battle, even ya mom was like wat r u doing?,
since ya record is 3-3, u should choose 2 retire like Pat ewing,
im proud ya flows elevatin, i c you gettin focused like glasses,
ya album is actually sellin' 2 people, well jus da dumb-masses,
i madd-en n im playin you like rookie, when really dis is all-pro,
u approach women but get ya game cutshort like da halftime show,
my flow like micheal myers, mixed wit vanilla ice, smooth n scary,
u aint noticed when u in public...
...dat when u speak, people tell u stop like u at da library,
4 a flow dis nice, u got'sa hav a mind like mine 4 da infrastructure,
ya wins match ya losses...
...while mine come all ova da place like ya verses structure,
jay got this 1 for harder punches and just better overall the other verse was iight tho
vote/jay
jay=nice punches flow and creativity liked the prop lines
Nas okay overall nice vocab and wordplay but cum harde with ya punches
v/jay
omg this was one hot battle\
ok jay says- your punches were very hard and hti often and the quantity plus quality was insane plus u had sum perosnals which worked, your flow was also nice but the flow was a tie
nas y.-your verse was very nice aswell and i think your vocab wass more expanded and your wordplay how u twistmed shit was nice and like i said flow was a tie
overall- ima give this to jay says czu of his punches were tougher and more often
definitely no hate
heres a link to one of my battles hit this up fairly if y'all can
dddddddddddrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr's all the way...................
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
hell nah i checked the battle when it was first made and thought it was a tie then i read it over and thought jay won but they both were tight
Uppin, i need more votes............
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Uppin for Legit Votes, No Crew votes At all, No dickriders Either
I dont have no dick ride votes or crew votes..............so there, my verse was better overrall
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u feminine like JULIET couldnt get props if u was a MOVIE SET
the only time u cuttin the raw is if u was a SUSHI CHEF
dog ya TEXTS WEAK, my advice: ya BEST CEASE
Vs/
hol up, quiet, he bout to speak...
...nevermind, i forgot nobody gives a fuck about wat jay says,
ill conquer pyramids of ancient aztec lines, like hernan cortez,
Imma try n help u out, 1st let go of my verse...,
...then everybody'll rejoice cause u finally droppin fire,
u cant approach lines, touch em n get cut ^ like barbed-wire,
Nas - I enjoyed your verse it was dope. the punches were hittin hard. the flow was alright minor elevation needed. the structure was tight in conjunction with the complexity. the creativity was decent. also needed minor elevation. 8.5/10
jay - your verse was also decent. the punches were hittin just not as hard as nas's.
flow was alrigh t needed minor elevation. the structure needed elevation and the complexity and creativity were the best of the entire piece. 8.0/10
v/nas.
vote on my battle against lyricalgangsta. 200+ to vote.
The R. -The Illest Ever Kid-
sorry heres the link. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=227215
The R. -The Illest Ever Kid-
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