Neva give up

[Freaky Zeke]

It's the big night tonight I'm gonna be crown
Either that or my face hitten the ground
My opponent is the undisputed champ
Do matter I'll have him sleepin with the lamp
Have him so shook sleepin wit the lights on
I'll do anything even do like Tyson, bite like a python
Here the match in the ring just waitin
I'm ready for this match and feelin real impatient
He steps up to be then me both touch glove
Nigga this for the title nobody gets no luv
Hear is ding then the lights go out
Then I wake up ref say first round knockout
Damn I wazn't ready this nigga punches my lights out
And the bullshit about it waz ref said it waz a 5 sec knock out
I trained real and learn to neva give up
I'm in the gym trainin and workin on my signature uppercut
My battle for the #5 contender waz easy as hell
My punches waz goin fast like a fuckin Dell
This nigga hit me one time and busted my nose
Then the time can and the end arose
I hit that nigga three time Boom,Boom,Boom
He fell to the floor ref said he can resume
Contender #4 waz a straight up punk
I hit that nigga one time left a perminate lump
The swellin didn't go down he threw in the towel
I waz in charge and determined like Collin Powell
Contender #3 waz the worst of then all
I did like the champ did to me in 5 sec he falled
Contender #2 waz tough like a mutha fucka
At the end he hit me 40 times but didn't got out like a sucka
Then I exploded in the match like nuclear warhead
I waz hittin this nigga so hard when he fell ref thought he waz dead
Tge final match it the champ and me agin for an endless fight
The my trainer told me neva give up and watch out for his right
The fight waz brutal as hell like World War 2
Nobody knew the outcome cause we both waz black and blue
Crucial battle waz brought to an end
Blood drippin on the and I waz ready to send
THAT deadly uppercut directly to his jaw
Nigga that blow damaged his ass like he waz punches by a saw
The champ fell ref said 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10
We have a new undisputed champ I'm wonderin how did I win
Then I remember the word got me all buck
My trainer told me those 3 words neva give up

Another open mic
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[Freaky Zeke]

Uppin for feed

[~ladie_streetz~]

good... nice drop.. very imaginable.. good theme and topic.. i was feeling it everything was good especially the flow... nice job on this no probs

[Freaky Zeke]

Thanx Uppin

[jon hannz]

is this the open mic session

[Jay-p]

do this look like a open mic session nigga.anyway i like this niggas flow hes got potential.big ups cuz

[L.I.T]

I like the peice, The flow was off a little but
other than that u came ok, Keep em Comin
Cuz i be seein u post OM like every Hour
lol, Dont stop though u get better each time man

~One~

[jon hannz]

do this look like a open mic session nigga.anyway i like this niggas flow hes got potential.big ups cuz

i got more than that dogg

[Jay-p]

what u got problem with what i said

[L.I.T]

i got more than that dogg

^^Stop Hatin man

[EyeBite]

this was good i liked the rhymes and the pretty good strucutre, flow was iight, visuals were good, i liked the topic, creative and interesting, vocab could be betta ...........good job overall,...8.2/10 keep elevating and keep it up, return the feed on my drop, emotions, thanks and peace

[Freaky Zeke]

Word
Uppin

[-lady~emsi-]

it was good i like how it was long and stayed with the story

[Freaky Zeke]

Uppin

[Spoken Words]

you had a standard rhyme scheme but i kinda couldnt of gotten a discription of what you was on about you had coo structure but could of did better work on making it so i can visual what you were trying to say keep dropen though keeep it up and elevate