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    Start-- need feedback

    Is this a good intro at all?:

    I only come out
    when its dark it's frightning
    the lightning is striking
    and i feed on the crazy
    souls brave enough to go hiking
    ---------------------------------------
    Ok who thinks these is good lines?
    1/ Ay i write with a steady hand, careful not to start an avalanche...
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& &
    2/ My words flow like the mississippi, Upstream? It's kinda trippy...
    Are those any good?

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    Not the place for it.

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