Is this a good intro at all?:
I only come out
when its dark it's frightning
the lightning is striking
and i feed on the crazy
souls brave enough to go hiking
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Ok who thinks these is good lines?
1/ Ay i write with a steady hand, careful not to start an avalanche...
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2/ My words flow like the mississippi, Upstream? It's kinda trippy...
Are those any good?