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    Cock The Shottie

    Cock the Shottie

    Cock the shottie and the shottie said
    Shoot these motherfuckers in the head
    Cock the shottie and the shottie said
    Bring it to these Fake G's right in the head, come on.

    Everybody wana go cappin, but when it comes down to it they was just yappin
    Full of shit always cuz they didnt like the clappin
    Runnin away when they hear the poppin
    Gettin scared cuz niggas be droppin
    Lookin Shady when we be robbin
    They be puffin blunts on the corner stead of clockin
    So motherfuckers why are they breathin.
    They lookin scared when they see the Po Po, cuz now they sayin no no.
    They see blood on thier fingers, they like oh no,
    See a Tear roll down his face, oh hell no.

    Cock the shottie and the shottie said
    Shoot these motherfuckers in the head
    Cock the shottie and the shottie said
    Bring it to these Fake G's right in the head, come on.
    ________________________________________________-

    Well thas all i got for now..writers block :\

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    Shits kid of simple..get more into it and i think you would be pretty good, you know..keep elevating good luck

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    uppin

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    I'm pretty confident in saying, you dont even own a shotgun... or do ANYTHING you talked about...

    Thats why people arent responding. No one wants to read bullshit. Write something real and original, and the piece will come alot easier, and attract more attention. Cause, honestly, this was wack dog.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    ouch

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    who wants to battle

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    wdf is this BS

    " cock the shottie and the shottie said"

    wdf , your intellect is just like not there,
    how old are you ? wow your ignorant.
    where are you from? just curious.

    don't ever drop another O.M again,
    sorry to be harsh but bs like this should
    not be here.

    retire-

    lmao @ cock the shottie"

    go jump

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    well...shottie symbolizes many things... it can be any thing..just means u gota step up.
    Next, don't jump to assumptions when u dont know shit about me...Whatever i write is real. And i dont care if u dont believe me...fuck, i dont have to prove shit to. Motherfucker ur beneath me.

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    You probably cant even say what the legal age is to own a shotgun without looking it up. STFU saying this shit is real with you. You're full of shit, and I'm not saying this to really offend you, cause I dont give a fuck about you, to care if you're offended or not. I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticism so you can get better. Think of something deeper, and then just write your feelings about the topic into bars, then blend it together. You'll get better doing that, then writing some BS OM where every word holds absolutely no meaning.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    Might hold no meaning to you, but if u werent selfless, u would understand to some it holds plenty.

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    This is the last time I try to help you out... ok, yea, to some people...alot of people actually, it might hold some meaning. But dude, that material has been done in so many ways, it says nothing about an indivual. you need to be your own person and write shit that happens in your real life, or real emotions... things like this. not some played out, wack shit, with an incredibly lame rhyme scheme. Now STFU, and just go practice... you'll get better that way.
    You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
    I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kigga
    Cock the Shottie

    Cock the shottie and the shottie said
    Shoot these motherfuckers in the head
    Cock the shottie and the shottie said
    Bring it to these Fake G's right in the head, come on.
    That's enough to tell me that you lack everything.
    Please stop talking and take advice. Right something
    with meaing man. when you write a piece like this
    the reader will think oh wow this dude is a moron ,
    or a wanna be thug with no type of intelligence and
    has a mind filled with violence and no sense of direction
    in life. As well as a low education. Like one of those
    worthless fools who believe everything
    can be solved by pulling the trigger. And thinking it's cool.

    That's how you come off as by writing a piece
    like this.

    enough of advice hopefully in the future these
    words will sink into your head. Don't be ignorant and
    stubborn.

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    Dude, you owe me 50% of my train of thought back..............this shit was horrible, i didnt even get through all of this drop and my head hurt...This was simple, no thought took place, i wouldnt be surprised if you wrote this in 5 minutes.
    PM for battle

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