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TripZ
chicho
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u got this chicho jus remember what i told u....
BUT DONT BITE!
IJL<--What More Do I Have To Say?
ight word play....................................
i spit the illest shit, it should be illegal/you don't scare me one bit, so go fuck yourself chico/your down on ur luck, and that ain't good amigo/and i see yo... ass tremblin'/ better go get some medicine/and then/stay in ur bed/cuz you might get attacked by me or my friends/imma rob you to afford dat benz/we'll never make amends/and you best believe this is where it ends/even before it begins
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Originally Posted by TripZ
Lmao and u wanted 2 start sum shit up wit me?
ahaha i woulda murked u son...
c i dont battle noobs...
IJL<--What More Do I Have To Say?
aiyo why don't you step off ur high horse and shut the fuck up?
Let me be the first to welcome u to rapbattle/
that said, let me be the first to beat u on rapbattle/
let me make on thing clear it s chicho not chico/
get that straight bitch or im going to have to beat u with my belt like if u were my nino(son)/
the day u rob me is the day i'll turn gay/
ur luck u will never see that day/
cuz if u see me on the streets i won't be alone/
my best friend the 35 will be right next to my hip bone/
u'll just stand there like if u saw the ghost of tupac/
booh nigga look behind u i thought ur friends had ur back/
u should have battled the other guy hes like u a rookie/
dis ur first lost but don't commit suicide b/
go home and right some more i'll give u a rematch/
the outcome will be like this one, im a leave with out a scratch/
thats the realest shit i ever wrote vote people vote
Tripz
Breakdown- ok you have no flow... rhymes is weak... there was no punches at all, structure was wack... all in all it was sad... it made me sick... i wasn't feelin it at all... but keep trying and eventually you'll get better... and im being nice about this 2 by the way...
And dont run ur mouth at me nemore ok?
Chicho
Breakdown- you've improved since our battle but u still have alot of work left to do... i saw some attempts 2 punch but u need to work on that still... structure was better... still try and keep the bars all the same size and make sure they have the same amount of syllables... wordplay is what makes a good battler and u didnt display any of that... but that will take time, it takes a while to catch on to the art of word play... good job tho u got my vote...
v/chicho for reasons above
IJL<--What More Do I Have To Say?
thanks man........................................
chico had better punchaes,adn his lines were more creative.
his flow was better than his too
v/chico
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look at me
graveyard :chainsaw2
im a crazy rapper :insane:
Id Vote 4 Chicho
Cuz This Dude Had Better Structure And His Punches Was Better Too
V Chicho
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Id Vote If I Could But I Just Got A Lil More 2 Go Then Ill Vote
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