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Thread: "Where I'm From" by .:Shellz:. Ft. J-Merk and spitflames15

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    "Where I'm From" by .:Shellz:. Ft. J-Merk and spitflames15

    "Where I'm From" by Lost Souls Collaborationz
    .:Shellz:. Verse = Purple
    J-Merk's Verse = Red
    spitflames' Verse = Blue

    Where I’m from niggaz will snatch ya watch and ya chain
    then make ya melon pop till you’d be watching ya brains
    Bronx borough, wuts good? We who started this rapp shyt
    and if u disrepsecting the Bronx, your whole body gets fractured
    New York, get it poppin!! ............... Where the fuck you at.........?
    Dudes kno the blocks hott wit cops, but still hardly tuck they gats
    thats why ya man Fat Joe be tellin them haters to lean back
    BX is home to some of the greatest artists alive, like Fat Joe
    and lets not forget the femcees, like J-Lo and Remy Martin
    Parkchester is where I be at, rite on St. Raymonds Avenue
    if u get rocked in the jaw, thats how people say they mad at u
    but really not all of the Bronx Borough is bad, we got a lot of class
    but if you an outsider crossin that GW Bridge....u not allowed to pass
    maybe ya’ll don’t have a place to call home, but I got one
    New York City!! Bronx Brorough is the hood that I come from


    philly phil, sommerville, where dem real niggas chillin at
    the same spot where dem bad chickens cluckin at
    the same spot where the cops be duckin at
    the same spot where bitches gettin smutted at
    the same spot where dem hustlas be flippin packs
    yea my whole hood we be pullin macks
    we be poppin that so u betta watch ya back
    b4 ya block got that tape like caution that
    this real life dog aint no commin back
    once u gone u gone thas the end of dat
    so if u talkin that shit u betta walk it black
    cuz if aint from here u might not make it back
    stuck in the gutter bloody ass naked scrap
    or a hole in the head unda ya fitted cap
    cuz we real out here u gotta give us that
    da home of brotherly love but aint to much of that


    I’m from the chi-town… where the real gangs all started
    Rules simple.. you stay loyal or get beat metally retarted
    Crime rates charted and on every corner ther’s a liquor store
    See bums faces..discraceful looks..lived life just to be poor
    No open doors…no way out…yo chances of leavin are low
    If u aint got no plugs might as roll a blunt…. and just blow
    Ghetto reality show…people think it’s a game but it’s life
    Lil J got some jordans..that nite got stuck up and shot twice
    There aint no crips or bloods in my hood all viclords and GD’s
    Decision aint hard like choosin between people or family
    Gotta have respect and u know u got to keep yo rec checked
    Disrespect the wrong nigga have u lookin in the eyes of death
    U got yo pussy ass niggas talk shit and then hide behind the gun
    But when u roll up on him different story he the first one to run
    Those niggaz get done and frankly my hood is all about fun
    I hold it down and let yall know that chi-town is where I’m from
    NCred aka Cyrious

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    I like this what you guys did and put together here this is something similar to what I did with whiteboy like a month ago and this is hot man I was following the flow all the way through cause I wanted to know about the next place that the next guy was from man I would like it if we could do a part two on this or something man a remix I would appreciate it if I could get in on something hot like this the structure was good man which made ya'll flow that much more attractive to look at instead of people squinting their eyes to try to read what you put down man this was nice man hot but pm me about that though keep flowing this is what I like to see

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    thatx for the feed maybe we can work somethin out uppin


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    This piece was good from yall.Yall had a good storyline but yall need to work on some emotion in yalls verse.And your Imagry was ok but I think you can do better with that.Yall had good structures and good wordplay in yalls verses.So the only things I can tell yall to work on is emotion and Imagry and yall will be straight but keep up the good work.Check out my OMs the 4 bottom ones are the newest.

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    i liked the way it all flow different people but the same message

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    word def like the piece alot it was hot, follwed it through no prob, only thing to work on would be the vocabulary. def need some practice on it, just elevate some more, imagery also, you lettin me know whats its like in ya hood, but i wanna feel like im on ya shoes walkin thru them streets, that kinda shit...still hot piece...last verse i think to me had more effect, but yall keep droppin and elevatin
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    yoooooooo, im lovin this shit, you always gotta rep where you from and you did.. shit was hottttt

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    yo nice ass rhymes
    i wa sfeelin this shit namean? the vocab and flow from all yall was tight as fuck, the topiv was good as well, i rep that good CINCINATI! A-1 area! darkside, thatz the part of the hood i live on itz too sides n shit..
    very interesting, and honestly i was feelin that flow real deal
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    Quote Originally Posted by ~ladie_streetz~
    yo nice ass rhymes
    i wa sfeelin this shit namean? the vocab and flow from all yall was tight as fuck, the topiv was good as well, i rep that good CINCINATI! A-1 area! darkside, thatz the part of the hood i live on itz too sides n shit..
    very interesting, and honestly i was feelin that flow real deal
    yes i agree but yo this is off topic but ladie streetz will u come join defined definiton we want u to be down

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    shit is hott fam can you you leave some feed on my open mics they in my sig they called 2005 visa versa remix AND turn they back on me

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