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    Divine Disappointment

    ayo... this goes out... to all you motha fuckas that think you know me...
    Credz, Spartan, Tech 9, Lay Doubt., all you bitches... you wanna talk shit?
    hahaha... well, dis ones for you...

    (chorus)
    yo...
    i'm sick of feeling responsible for all of you ungratefuls
    unwilling to share with starving while you enjoy all of your platefuls
    from the day i gave you life untill your final annointment
    you bitches aint been shit, but divine disappointment

    my frustration aimed at what i created
    got me feeling discombobulated.
    i hated the boredom, so i reinstated entertainment
    a simple experiment, now i see i made the wrong decision
    my project appeared easy, but had no direction or precision
    beginner's luck, only up to recent times do i feel stuck
    i'm the only one to blame for things that ran amuck
    i built up, these hoes n they dont even give a fuck
    might as well bag up these animals n toss em in a truck
    these bitches'll never touch, shake, or even feel my hands
    my quote unquote followers still constantly fill the stands
    on the so-called sabbath day, and for years it's been this way
    but they cant decide whether it's the first or last day to pray
    they seem to think that i'm forgiving of all...
    which means they have a scapegoat, if they happen to drop the ball
    i've been coined with many names, none of which to me are flattering
    they look to me for a guidance, but this beggin shit aint mattering
    there's nothing i can do to help this situation...
    when they have internal conflicts with their whole congregation
    they gather every week, just to speak of me in song
    these little faggots i created in this project gone wrong

    chorus:
    i'm sick of feeling responsible for all of you ungratefuls
    unwilling to share with starving while you enjoy all of your platefuls
    from the day i gave you life untill your final annointment
    you bitches aint been shit, but divine disappointment

    if i had the power to help you, i wouldn't even bother
    so stop thinking that i love you and stop calling me your father
    didn't plan on you evolving into this mess with which i deal
    asking for my forgiveness when you lie, cheat, and steal.
    what the hell do you want me to do? try and save yourself
    i can't help your marriage, chlldren, or your stages of health
    i can't control destiny, where'd you come up with that notion?
    there's no cure for aids, so don't even bother with that potion
    my problem's far from any of your so-called devastations
    like this oncoming war between the so-called united nations
    i regret making you all, you make my blood pressure climb
    i wish i didn't, but even i cant turn back the hands of time

    chorus: (X2)
    i'm sick of feeling responsible for all of you ungratefuls
    unwilling to share with starving while you enjoy all of your platefuls
    from the day i gave you life untill your final annointment
    you bitches aint been shit, but divine disappointment
    Last edited by Spoken; September 30th, 2005 at 08:34 PM
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    it was coo........complexity was good........vocab was off the chain.....was feelin da flow.....creativity...(def. there) but good job tho..........looked like u took ur time on this ...i wud like to see more of ur work in the future.......as a matter of fact id like to see u battle the dudes u addressed this to....1



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    yeah this was defenitly a nice piece
    good way to release your flustration to these
    fucking haters good shit kepp writing........................................... ..
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    my audio shit

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    ROTFL u know you found big ass words from rhymezone.com LMAO i havent dissed you yet but i guess im go have to LMAO wow now you made me have to diss you for fun

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    To DAMN DOPE^^^




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    hmmmm.....a diss war huh.......

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    thanks for tha feed peeps, ayo spartan, you was gettin on me and sayin i suck jus cause credz dissed me, you know i had to get atcha, diss me if you want bitch, but imma come back harder homie, best belive...
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    lol u still didnt come harder then credz LMAO he owned you bad

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    ^^dickrider^^ uppin for feed...
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    yo clisk go check out my peice with adr....entiltled What We Know and spartan if u come back ....umm cud u go hit it up 2 i hit up one of ur oms with adr a long time ago....so cud ya plz.......

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    Took you a little over a week to write this and I see no punches just a bunch of rambling. I wrote my diss in less than a hour AND that contained punches. Work on your punches man. All you really did in this was just talk how great you are and about things that never even happened, Perhaps getting some true facts would be nice as well? But hey man, if you need some help battling, I'll be more than happy to help you out. Feel free to hit me up on AIM or MSN if you want some help.

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    lol........i need help with battling...........will u help me??

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    ^ Yeah sure VerbZ, I can help you out tomorrow most likely.

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    uppin for desent feed...
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