im lookin for grace at a wonderful pace/
i could claim i was hustlin on da block, but dat aint da case/
actually i found god, jus like mace/
lookin for salace while in dis dark place/
findin a relationship, buildin a strong base/
searchin for a woman to stand by me and embrace/
i g2g go niggas, that was jus a quick spit, please leave crticizem or complements
this had no purpose
your flow was way off and next time dont just drop quick shit dropo a real verse with a purpose and a good flow
*bullshit*
THE FAMILY.
look man u dont gotta be so harsh, i hadnt read da rules of da board yet(atleast 16 lines) i jus wanted to spit. imma bring it next time.
yo it was ok but it was to short and had no reason yo what did u want to say in the song
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yo bitches click here
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CORRUPTED MINDZ
BLACK DEATH
OPEN MIC
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This piece, Wow this piece.. needs to be longer, needs complexity, needs better vocab. and needs some kind of deep thought put into it. nuff said
work on this..
Roc-A-Fella !
straight up what white said yo
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yo bitches click here
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OPEN MIC
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ya yo listen...lemme inform u...don quick spit anywhere on this site, unless its in bitch slapped to call sum1 out other than that...this is where u start out to get known...pretty much writtins and work that is something worth getting commented on... but overall that wasn't a bad flow but ure wordplay was a lil too basic
EvOLuTioN iz fo Da BesT
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
shit, you came here to say what you go to say.
and you said it.
i got your point.
short, but straight.
shits hot. mad props son...
ima make sumfin like that...
ima put link in my sig, comment it if you wish.
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