DTBOIP1
Vortex2
I dont want to sound like garbage, writing is a pleasure
one mans garbage, is another ones tressure.
So as you read on, just to let you know
my point will be flipped and twisted, so use your mind as a plough.
break through my generic writing concept
and you might know why if feel so upset.
I keep seeing ya'll say "yo dude you need to 'Elevate'"
but seems like yall cant find a lamer way, for yall to hate.
If I took your advice and really wanted to elevate.
Your slow elevator ride, is way too long for me to wait.
I'd use the fuckin fire stairs, and beat you up to the top.
Cut the fuckin pullie loose, and then listen to you drop.
And when I say 'you drop', i dont mean as in your new reccord
obviously, you cant imagine the elevator being towed out, by the wrecker.
Most of yall like to kill people's rap dream
tho you never really think of how much it might mean
to the folks that put so much effort, to come up with their entire scene
it could of taken months for me to write this
but i could be lying, you know ignorance is bliss.
so before you go judging me and telling me that i suck
go over my shit twice, "elevate" your comments, cuz i dont give a fuck!
Go head criticise every mistake now how the Fuck should I Elevate?
Hip-hop is a house of raw expression and freedom of spirits
Heart of the poetic, but some inherit hate instead of giving merits
i didn’t even edit most my posts, i just sketched mental notes
im open-minded to feed folks, but don’t respect feeble quotes
& neither does the rest of the talent, your jealous n it’s apparent
You never been nice, so all your elevation advice is transparent
Talking that dyslexic slang, saying “u shood impove evaryfang”
The fuck kid; cop the Collins-dictionary b4 u bring that bullshit
Hurry-come-up, you’re not a vet, i seen noobs way better for true
im not done yet punk, wait up chump “i gotta little Meta for you”
Nah fuck it make it a simile, im like fire, leave yo ass as ashes G
Nobody writes fast as me, i vomit Ebonics, flip epics in seconds
im classed classic already get me? i don’t need your acceptance
Fuck ur recommendations, yes i do battle don’t check my patience
u c me im simply the perfect enemy, so nope were not friends
So go raise your fucking game..- b4 u freepost in my dope OM’;s
C my title, check the status, i bring revelations to you suckers
So mother-fuck your fucking weak assed feed back fuckers
Go head criticise every mistake now how the Fuck should I Elevate?
Originally Posted by mcbadboy
