up....If anyone minds, i need 1 more vote to close the battle in my link, can any1 spend a minute of there time to judge it? thanks i appreciate it
up....If anyone minds, i need 1 more vote to close the battle in my link, can any1 spend a minute of there time to judge it? thanks i appreciate it
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
yeh this wasnt as good as i thought it would be, the title of the peice was good, but your verse was lacking everything. not much imagery or creativity, some things werent really needed. elevate some more.
leave feed.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235689
arite i get wat ure sayin, i didn't really take the time out that i should have to make an in depth piece tho, thx
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
upin for more feed
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
uppin this for more feed
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
well. shit looked hot to me.
nothing really wrong.
would need a beat, a hook, and another verse. lol
But then again, im white, waht do I know about rap? ha!
nah but fa real, shits cool.
The only thing I was feeling on this was the flow... I could definitley catch it. That being said I felt it was too basic, vocab just wasnt there. Be more descriptive in future. Multi's wouldve helped this 'stand out' as someone else said. My personal view is drop the slashes (makes you look illterate) but thats up to you. Average drop, you can improve.
Elevate. FLow was weak, Structure was weak, No vocab, No multies, No wordplay. Rhymes were a lil wack also. It was too simple for me. Overall I can say is elevate.
"D.V.R.a.k.a.M.C. is no longer here and has given up account"
yo u guyz r right this is 1 of my earliest pieces...now if i made a v-2 to this it wuld be much more improved, anyway its been a long ass minute before i had more feed...get at it thx
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
werdd...no body likes me? :-(
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
Yo if anybody minds can u leave a
1) overall rating 1-10
2) Flow rating 1-10
3) word play rating 1-10
4) structure rating 1-10
5) critizism and or comments
thx this is to help my book
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
up.....
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237533
hit that up
you need to elevate and get rid of the "/" they make you look like a noob
flow and message was the only really thing decent about this piece
noi multies,vocab, bad structure........ go see the elevation forum
sorry
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Originally Posted by Vamp.
Lol this was wen i had 100 posts but thx i need a rating on the shit tho
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
by the way i can't vote on ure shit pharoah i only got 300 posts
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"I'm not cocky, I'm confident
So when you tell me I'm the best, its a compliment"
-JADAKISS
I alredy read your bullshit and know your deal/
Your raps are as true as "McDonalds" being a "healthy meal"/
-EvOLuTioN
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