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Thread: If Only You Belive In Miracles (feat. Clisk)

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    Par-War
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    If Only You Belive In Miracles (feat. Clisk)


    This goes out to Spartan and A.chilles, yall fucked with the wrong brothers this time fam haha, but if you want war with WAR, then you got it mutha fucker!

    Par~War
    mutha fuckers you dont wanna SPAR with fam
    us brothers bringin heat enough ta cause a TAN
    A. dude, you might wanna CHILL with beef
    we dont grill ta eat, you tender enough ta kill wit Es

    Clisk
    ayo, cut me off the set? i'll still be on by a thread, this thread
    cause beef aint chewed untill my jaws off ya head
    you all been mislead, you say im steppin with the wind?
    thats fine, when i return, you'll never know i crept in...

    (chorus)
    Spartan gettin back at this with halve of the tactical percision
    (If only u Believe in Miracles)
    peerin through his eyes I see dis fagot has no practical vision
    (black death best pray for a Miracle)
    Everything we say is spiratual, slayin dudes we've proved inferior
    No stopin us until all your affiliates are removed from Raps interior
    (Spartan betta B riding high on a Miracle)


    (Verse 1)
    Par~War
    yo...I saw the diss against Clisk..and ya know what.........

    All them quotes in one diss and he never asked u ta reimburse
    I think clisk deserves credit for writin halve of your verse
    your shits barley a haze, I wouldnt even be grazed if rhymes could kill
    and ta prove it imma post a link to................. When Time Stood Still

    Breakdown


    I skipped over the one halve pasted blue; as opposed to my raps...
    ...............................Par Verse= every rough-draft gets rave reviews
    conclusion= you should be lickin White Outs nut-sack for savin you

    example:
    Quote Originally Posted by Spartan
    Flying The Air, But No Movement "Standed"
    .................................................. .......................................Tragic
    really?...... since when was making up words assumed grammatic*
    spuein wack shit, you rhymes are 'whyte noice" like TV tubes of static
    fuck wit us....I leave your eyes blotched like seein spots from heat waves
    your comic timing is often seen late......
    ...........then again your sence of humor is based off funny -shit dot T-K


    ...scratchin you off like a DJ playin "Pon De Replay"..

    your fuckin freak kid, so simply you drawin stares is understandable, plus...
    the way you be eatin on moderated dick would make a cannible blush


    (chorus)
    Spartan gettin back at this with halve of the tactical percision
    (If only u Believe in Miracles)
    peerin through his eyes I see dis fagot has no practical vision
    (black death best pray for a Miracle)
    Everything we say is spiratual, slayin dudes we've proved inferior
    No stopin us until all your affiliates are removed from Raps interior
    (Spartan betta B riding high on a Miracle)

    (Verse 2)
    Clisk
    yo, you claim you represent rap? i assume you entitle loss
    how could you win, when this beef gives you suicidal thoughts
    and Achilles, you say my concepts are non-sense, there nada?
    keep talkin shit, youll be beggin for legaments, like worshopin allah*
    i would cap spartans ass, but for some reason the lead sticks
    and doesnt help that he's functioning on cum from credz dick
    i guess its true, a dick with a dickrider always wins
    so these noobies guzzle so much piss, the bar's burried in
    my shits so grimmy, you could almost say i fucked the game
    cause i cum original, listen, we dont even nut the same
    black death, this aint a wide variety, its thinner choices
    either step down or get murked, by your own inner voices
    you gettin sentenced at the pearly gates, i'm peerin over
    seein what its like to find out, your career is over BITCH!

    (chorus)
    Spartan gettin back at this with halve of the tactical percision
    (If only u Believe in Miracles)
    peerin through his eyes I see dis fagot has no practical vision
    (black death best pray for a Miracle)
    Everything we say is spiratual, slayin dudes we've proved inferior
    No stopin us until all your affiliates are removed from Raps interior
    (Spartan betta B riding high on a Miracle)


    *"Standed" isnt a word, its stood, meaning its not grammatic

    *allah- a worshiped god, mainly in isrial... some people say his name came from muslums treasuring there body parts... A-arm L-leg L-leg- A-arm H-head (get it?)


    Last edited by Par-War; October 7th, 2005 at 01:16 AM

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    Now that shit was fuckin whack on the tip
    i couldnt wait for that shit ta end
    i aint gotta girl but you gotta boyfriend

    hahaha just a two liner but still better then that shit

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    lol...Whyte out...*DIE*...

    Clisk...you had some dope shit lol...loved all that flow, it was an easy read but the chorus seemed a little jacked up compared to the rest....You did an exceptional job on this piece and I'd look forward to doing a topical sometime with you....Good verse....

    Par-War...I liked clisks a lot more because of the forced shit like that hidden "Spartan" and "Achilles" shit...lol What is this word? >>> "Es"...speakin' spanish dogg? Other than that your flow is always dope as hell ...you guys had a good concept...and your topic wasn't too bad as well...love seein new shit in the Open Mic section...so many people writing about the same topic and you guys brought more heat to it...maybe this will inspire some people...good job on this...

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    lol, guess you were right bout the chorus Clisk, my bad bro, props definatly on your verse...was a little more personal for you seeing as its your beef. Thanks for the look Nash...imma get back at ya on your OM

    oh ya and...
    Quote Originally Posted by Whyte Out
    i couldnt wait for that shit ta end
    i aint gotta girl but you gotta boyfriend
    not only was that wack, but were brothers you sick faggot......damn sum1 must of been abused as a child...?

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    Pretty good shit both yall

    I was feeling Clisk's verse a little more...but par you had a good verse aswell....chorus was weak..and off-flow...not really any quotables but it was a.....7/10 overall
    keep dropping and im hoping to see more shit from both yall...!..word up
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    I agree with most of the comments. At 1st I disliked the chorus. However, after I read the chorus over and over, it seemed to grow on me. Now, I think the chorus had that extra something that needed to be included. At some places, the vocab was original and hadn't been used before. This was a good collabo. Some places need to be touched up a bit, but it was okay....

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    Thie shit was good from yall.But try to more quotes with your punches.And the chorus was aight but I think it could have been better.But yalls verses were real good.But just keep up the writing and it will get better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Par-War
    lol, guess you were right bout the chorus Clisk, my bad bro, props definatly on your verse...was a little more personal for you seeing as its your beef. Thanks for the look Nash...imma get back at ya on your OM
    lol, i told you homie, we should have had a shorter, more personal chorus, its all good, good drop though homie... word
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    That second link you left isn't a reply to someone else's Open Mic, replace that link with proper feedback or this will get closed, Thanks.

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