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Thread: Being A Daddy(I'm Father Now) Ft-ADR

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    Being A Daddy(I'm Father Now) Ft-ADR


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=236820
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    A.chilles
    March Tenth, 1:39, 05, A Baby Is About To Be Born
    I Can Hear Here Screming, Body Sweating Mouth Is Warm
    In The Car Tripping To The Hospital, Doing Eighty
    Trying To Take Life's Opsticles, Deliver A New Baby
    I'm Through Maybe, I'm Running Looking For The Room
    Family In The Hall, Darkness Looking To Put Me In Doom
    Now I'm In The Room, She Screaming, Swearing Loud
    And I'm Off In Space, Pannicking, My Hair In The Cloud
    Baby's Coming, I Feel I'm Done And, Doc Said It's A Girl
    Watching Her Release The Pain, Pop, Head's In This World
    A New Baby Is Born, My Mind's Lost, Can't Sleep At Night
    When I First Held Her, She Had To Be The Seek In My Light
    Ciggarette's Burning, Five Pack's, I'm Stressing To Much
    Now The Momma's Gone New Girl, Momma Gave Two Fucks
    It's Hard To Breath, Smoking Weed's Just Making It Worse
    Before She Turns Out Bad, Her Dad Will Lay In A Hurse
    Love My Kid To Heaven And Back, What Ever It Take's See
    And I'll Be By Her Side Forever, Untill Death Shake's Me
    7 Months In Five Day's, I'm Proud To Call Her My Daughter
    Even Though Night's Get Sweaty, The Walls Get Hotter
    First Words, Da Da, I Felt Like A Real Father, I Stuck In
    Hopping One Day She Doesn't Grow Up To Say Fuck Him
    If I Could Change Time, I Wouldn't Change Time At All
    I'll Rob, Kill To Support Her, Jail, I Won't Mind At All
    Crying, Crawling, Soon I'll Have To Chase Her Around
    I Cherish Every Moment, Till She See Me Tasting The Ground



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    stomachs pookin~waters brok'n feelin rushes str8 to my heart..
    from the start~my thoughts've fallen apart hope my child brings lite to my dark..
    a blessing in disguise~bright eyes gloom when i heard she was bout to drop..
    could it be~what i breed soon to dream what i bleed once the water pop'd..
    12 35~my highs gone,nurses tell me remain calm but how can i..
    left the cam in the whip~thoughts un balanced,hope shes born with slant eyes..
    the site of whats rite~soon to be pop'd threw both thighs,while pain killers relievin..
    im i dreamin?cant leave now but im feelin like fab the way i was breathing
    i see the head poke~its no joke my first glance was a deep smile..
    years pass~same laugh as me tan as me,growm with the love for the same child..
    i rest in dirt~before her feelins ever get hurt but that aint even the worst..
    the pride~joy and whats inside can only be describe as love stored and im bout to burst..

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    And Another One Hommie..Give Us Some Feed Here

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    that was hot i cant find one bad thing to say about that

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    CORRUPTED MINDZ
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    OPEN MIC


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    Thanks Man Thanks

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    no problem man

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    CORRUPTED MINDZ
    BLACK DEATH

    OPEN MIC


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    if ur good ur good

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    CORRUPTED MINDZ
    BLACK DEATH

    OPEN MIC


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    ummmmmm ok



    anyways uppin for feed peepz...

    leave links i get at them wordness!!


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    Damn Nobody Feeding Me Yo Lol.

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    man that shit was damn good i felt it and i know what you mean cuz i gotta son on the way and im only 16 it sucks man that one time you forget to wear a rubber you a father and shes a mother good shit and plz leave feed on my OM its called My Downfall

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    Link Me Up Fams...I'll Drop Some Feed.

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    hot shit... structer flow and word play were all very good.

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    exelent piece dude. i can tell its from the heart, the whole thing was great. the structure was good.. i think you could have gotten a little more creative with word choice, but there was alotta rhymes i liked though....
    keep writing real life ish..

    peace,.,.,.,.,.,.,

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