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Thread: To Kill or not to Kill...(p'rt-1)

  1. October 8th, 2005, 02:17 PM #1
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    To Kill or not to Kill...(p'rt-1)

    To kill or not to kill that is the question
    How do we tame these murderous intentions?
    Hundreds & thousands of guns litter cities
    Shall I grab one? or hope Grim-Reaper pities
    My presence & angels guard my existence
    Manifest blessed, breaking complex systems
    But is my method enough to change mankind?
    See sum signs its better to use brains than nines
    Guess they’ll just forget, this chronicle is slept
    So many times, they’ll just call it old concept
    & claim they can’t see me or they all gone deaf
    Ready for demise; gasp one last long breath
    Exhale the spirit & swim in the darkness
    As heartless horrors,-lurk amid the starkness
    Showcases, silenced voices with no faces
    Barely Gods children transcend to Oasis
    According to prophets & men of the cloth
    While soldiers place their faith in Kalashnikov

    To kill or not to kill, to maim or not to maim
    New angle same concept… rising up again
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  2. October 8th, 2005, 02:21 PM #2
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    vortex want to battle me

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    Bring yo game here bitches and hoes
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  3. October 8th, 2005, 02:23 PM #3
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    your not meant to post that in here yo.. u etheir pm niggaz or goto bitchslapped

    this is where to give feedback on a piece


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  4. October 8th, 2005, 04:05 PM #4
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    i was feeling what you were saying in this shit right here
    the flow was a litle off, could have been better just needs to be leveled out betta and your topic was tight, i love killa type shit it was great had real feelin to it keep up the good work aight
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  5. October 8th, 2005, 05:14 PM #5
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    I was feelin this. I really like the fact that u have a wider vocab than alot of the others here. Good job on this.
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  6. October 8th, 2005, 05:15 PM #6
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    yo hit thiz up with honest feed thanks, well appreciated if u hit thiz up for me returning favor
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  7. October 9th, 2005, 08:41 AM #7
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    thanks yo.. its inspired by shakesperares "to be or not to be" poem



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  8. October 9th, 2005, 09:01 AM #8
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    Flow was very strong in this piece. You dropped a pretty creative verse...You remained on topic with a poetic like drop...

    I thought the vocab you used was very situated for this piece. You managed to take a poem and bring the words right at the audience and give them a feeling like WOW...
    Almost like this was written in 3-D... Straight drop
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  9. October 9th, 2005, 10:01 AM #9
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    flow was strong. youre vocab has improved vortex, great job, imagery was nice also

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    Poetry

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    this is perhaps the gayest thread...ALIVE....
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  10. October 9th, 2005, 11:06 AM #10
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    propa shit, 6 feet deep stuff, i reckon this is dope, how long it take you to make it?
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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  11. October 9th, 2005, 04:22 PM #11
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    good looking out to all



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    Quote Originally Posted by Pakaveli
    propa shit, 6 feet deep stuff, i reckon this is dope, how long it take you to make it?

    yo man just something like 5-10 minutes while im smoking a spliff

    maybe a minute of thinking b4 writing u kno

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  12. October 10th, 2005, 09:54 AM #12
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  13. October 10th, 2005, 04:30 PM #13
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    guess we all done with this knowledge then
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  14. October 12th, 2005, 02:29 PM #14
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  15. October 12th, 2005, 02:53 PM #15
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    This was a nice piece i like the
    way you took shakesphere poem and made
    it your own nice creativity

    peep my shit
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    Battle needs Closing

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    OPEN MICS

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    my audio shit

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