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    Survivor feturing Trema

    Survivor feturing Trema

    Katrina
    Question why must they hate when it concerns the rap game
    Katrina will proclaim about the same Pearson she became
    I can’t help it if I hate it when people have to mention my name
    I spoke the truth you wanted to hate so how am I to blame
    This girl complain that now its all my fault
    Girl you was careless who forgot to close the vault
    Now look what happened they found out what you really got
    Saying you got skills? When you don’t because you were caught
    Let me do the honours and pledge to squash this beef
    I let emotion get the better of me so now im in disbelief
    That id drop as low as your level when I already know
    That its pointless … truth I don’t want beef anymore
    So I learned you got to brush it of and leave them hate
    These people will hate over anything call it fate
    I wont create it Earth can be a small place when you got haters who permit
    To carry this be beef on weather its out on the streets or when they click submit


    Trema
    I advise you that um a survivor,no anchor can make me kneel
    No bully can make me skweel, my lyrics are made of steel
    Hate feed don’t make me bleed but makes me succeed
    So I can flee when I cant breathe, a warrior never leaves
    Without completing his task wether its daytime or dark
    On the corner or in the park, my status..all u have to do is ask
    I survived but nearly died sometimes I multiplied my own enemy
    Just by my own memory, that sometimes looked so easy

    Smoke of a blunt, sip of some vodka, would make me feel I was dreaming
    Found out I was, reality came back too fast my vocabulary started bleeding
    My sight on the look out for those who insisted on providing the crap
    They tried to make me crack,but my elevation put a strain on they’re back
    Never that, I used the feed to provide my vocab with wat I need
    Now that I see!, my meanings dig under the crust so deep
    And all the way down to a warrior stroke survivors destiny
    To help those who need help, and to for fill history
    ......

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    common uppin this hot piece
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    yo i like both of ya verses it was hard body, i have nothing to say but keep up the good work we need more people like ya in this site that donmt rap about ggangster shit but rap about topics that matter, i'm about to drop one soon i want ya opinion on it ok, but keep it up aight

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    i only read kat's verse


    katrina verse was madd emotional, she made me almost cry yo. her rhyme scheme is getting d0pe, she's elevating fast. i like the metaphors and the imagery. there's a great amount of feeling put into kat's verse. and the vocabulary was basic, but that's kinda what makes it real good.

    9/10

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    hotshit. the flo was good and tight. im guessin who your verse was about katrina but it was hot, the rhymes was good and it seemed ta come from ya heart and feelings about some one. trema, hot verse as well. both of U came together with a good subject and two hot verses, in ma opinion, U both should've had a chorus with it

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    thanks for the feed

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    you're mo than welcome.....

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    yo both verses is fire i feelin them all i can say is Katrina seem hungry and she out ta take what she want so do what u do and keep doin it

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    yo iwanna wanna battle

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    Katrina- Alright you got some wording problems,addition to that you got grammar problems. The flow is a bit choppy for me, the grammar of your words is all messed up. Elevate on that, and your lines is elementry, your line's arent connecting very good. Besides all that you had a ok verse, elevate a bit more and change your rhyme scheme...Peace. 7/10

    Trema- You had good flow on your part, Lines were connecting and it made sense. Don't stretch your Lines that Much like the 2nd one, the 1st one is better for you. You had a good vivd of imagery and emotion. Overall you did a good job on your part..Peace 8/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fawn Dullmiballs
    i only read kat's verse

    lol,


    aaaw 2 love birds up the tree...

    ayt anyway-uppin
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    Quote Originally Posted by Trema
    lol,


    aaaw 2 love birds up the tree...

    ayt anyway-uppin
    you know thats no right trem
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    marv.....should be jason right there ^^^^...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vamp.
    marv.....should be jason right there ^^^^...
    oi leave feed dev :yes:

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