Freestyle

[u-neek.ua]

Welcome to the show,Mr Neek with the boss flow,
Hailing from the streets none other than glasgow,
Flowing better than anyone you ever heard these days,
Battlin' any mc an never phased,
Knightswood boy born n raised,
Reppin' for Scotland 'cause it seems we got no say,
Well,if your feeling my style then gimme the feedback,
And dont start shit if you think im wack,
'Cause so far i seem better than most mc's on this who try to rap,
Last guy who started that shit got a straight backhand slap,
Im tryin to add comedy to hip-hop in this age,
'Cause it just seems like a fashion show with these commercial cats on the stage,
I rep underground never ever the fakeness,
And i kill these lyrics when i shake this,
Other rappers take mic's and say "Yo did i break this??"
But im down with this shit so i come to take this,
This feeble rap game,
This fake love for fame,
But i love it when i battle 'cause im never in shame,
Im jus 'causin wet trousers to other rappers i just aint been named,
Aint been crowned,
Aint Been found,
Still stuck in the underground,
But to the bigtime is where im bound.

Gimme That Feed Back


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...02#post3300502
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238627

[pio]

r u a dumbass

[u-neek.ua]

no....but id like an decent piece of feedback...less of your shit ya cuntrag

:hung: <---YOU!

[Tru$t]

wrong place...drop ya wack shit on da freestyle place..

[Knightmare.]

i dont think freestyles are allowed

[Legacy01]

Yo, this is OM...u can freestyle bout wat u want, fuk those pplz above ^^^^
and to critique yours with more respect then whack, they dunno wat they on bout man. It was aiight, played topic but some pretty nice lines in there

But i love it when i battle 'cause im never in shame,
Im jus 'causin wet trousers to other rappers i just aint been named,

And structure was aiight, started off from ya place and then moved to now yakno? wellz, flow was pretty descent and there was aiight multis, elevatin on complexity..was a good read, keep droppin homie

[Atti]

*Scratches Head*

Damn, :/

The Structure Was Off,
Tryn Make Your Lines Generally The Same Lengeth
... That'll Make For A Better Flow.

Use Punches And Wordplay.
Dont Just Make A Bunch Of Just General Comments
... Use Writing Techniques To Give Them Meaning And Impact.

Lolol And Man,
I Just Could Take This Shit Seriously
... The Whole Time I Was Just Imagining That Scotish Accent Rapping

Lolololololmao

... Lol, Keep Writing Man Haha.

[young hov]

theres no freestyle's and you need to leave 2 links to something on om that you left feedback on

[Johnny 6-feet]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on. And no freestyles.

Closed.