thanks..

[Mackin']

its 11:00 p.m and im walkin down the street
i look around, and i see one of the hottest girls ive ever seen
... and she was lookin at me.....

i look away, wait a second, then look back
i stare and im thinkin to myself, her bodies addictin like crack
i walk towards her, then i hesitate, my hands start to shark
im nervious, my heart is pumpin at a very fast rate
i start walkin towards her again, thinkin how ima ask her on a date
as i walk i stare at her body that could make a gay man become str8
i say hi, she says hi, i say my name, she says hers
she takes a second and looks threw her purse
she stops and mumbles, "i got one", and thats all i heard
we start talkin, and after 15 minutes i ask her on a date
then she says, "forget that, you dont have to wait"
"for what" i said, becomin very confused
then she stopped and said, "to fuck, you silly goose..
my apartments a block away, thats where we could do it"
of course i took her offer and if you wouldnt, then your stupid
we startin walkin, i think, then i ask her if shes got condoms
she said "yep, thats y i looked in my purse and said, i got one"
we got to her apartment and she started to undress me
she started givin me head and my dick got hard like concrete
she was so good at it, she could be breathe on my dick and gimme chills
then we started fucken, her pussy could make a guy go head over heals
after a couple of hours of sex, we fell asleep
i woke up in the mornin to her pushin on me
i said to her "whats goin on, what are you doin"
she said "my husbands on his way home, you should get movin"
i said "WHAT!?".. then though fuck it, i dressed then left
but as i was i was walkin out the door i said "thanks.....for the sex"

[Mackin']

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...563#post3291563
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=240295

.. my links^^^

[Ike Ill.]

Hm, Funny I should say. Unless this was serious.

Either way it had a bit of humor in it, true feelings I suppose? Most guys can relate in the end, which is sort of sad. No lines to quote, the whole thing itself seems like one long line, if you get what I mean.

In the end, the read was short, simple and pretty decent on the level of mind thoughts. Makes you sort of giggly inside. Structure and flow were on point, not that structure matters. Anyway, pretty well done.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=241510

^ thanks.. =) lol

[Mistral]

1st link doesnt work.

2nd link had bad feedback

so closed.