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u spit first
tgboyz
da king01
10-15 lines
10 minutes till check
30 mins afta check 2 spit
no d/r votes
no crew votes
u spit first
checkin'
Always Spit From The TopRip it upTgBoyz
checkin'
They got me labled as a newbie, and if you was smart you would catch me first and try to shoot me.//
I might be new to this typing arena, but i got punchlines that smack you harder then the winds from hurricane Katrina!//
My battle record is still 0 and 0, but everybody know that my rhymes kill more people then the sounds of you pickin' out your fro.//
Don't think that this is all all for show, cuz I would hate to waste my time on sum 1 that even give me some go.//
After I win I'm going to fill out my elite application, then you can go to the doctor and get that last vaczanation.//
That would keep you from losin' battles you see?//
If you want some static wit' that semi automatic let's have it//
I'll murder you and toss your body in the sea, that was all to simple if you got something worthy come and spit at me G//
Always Spit From The TopRip it upTgBoyz
yo u a wannab emcee,u'll neva b,on tha same pedastal as me
u'll need metal stilts to see,into my eyes,and further behind
into the mind,of a great lyricist,no hate,but hear me bitch
don't ur momma no, 'smoking kills' she won't get off my dick
she loves my thrills,she's on the pill,cuz i got her up tha grill
i'm like michael jordan,i'll bounce ur balls around,stretch em' to tha ground
tie them down,get a knife and curcumcise u right now
wen i'm finished wit u, u won't need balls,u want have a manhood
this shud be censored,atleast u'll be remembered,as tha first herb
to get dismembered by raps,sit on my lap,so i can pop a cap in ur ass
this line is my last,bitch i knew that your bitch ass cudn't last
uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!/1
uppin/2
I don't know you, but if you think you can beat me B//
The this is like Amerie with on thing you got trippin G//
Your mom should of had an abortion with you bitch, cuz it's a long life scar to be labled as a snitch//
Now don't run back and tell your crew you got dissed//
Cuz if anyone of them steps to me the clips packing with hollw tips//
they only labeled this as a battle, cuz if they called this an all and out war, I'm the grimy nigga that would be kickin' down your door//
You claim you a thug, but you spend most of you time online..
I guess that you found out everywhere you go the streets are mine//
Now before you come back I hope that you take you time//
Cuz I don't feel like reading some shit that I spit in the last line//
Always Spit From The TopRip it upTgBoyz
tgboyz , to tell the truth, your verse was pretty bad.. You need to work on your rhyme scheme and shorten the length of your bars. The dissing were not strong enough in your verse.
da king01, you definitely had the better punches in this battle. You are comming along, but these lines did not rhyme in your verse:
wen i'm finished wit u, u won't need balls,u want have a manhood
this shud be censored,atleast u'll be remembered,as tha first herb
Both yall should work on a better rhyme scheme...
Vote - Da King 01, stronger punches
damnnnn king tore tg apart in that battle
aight thnx yall
yea da king got this one he had tha vocab. to tg ya need ta elevate da king had betta punchlines i was feelin him alot more
v/da king
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aight thnx 4 tha vote
uppin/3
uppin'
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