Vamp - the complexity in your verse was pretty nice. For the most part, I think the posistioning in your verse was on point. Good story from your view
Vafinest - You flow was very consistant. The over usage of the word "I" was pretty acceptable because it gave some authencity to your verse.
Spekz - Your verse lured in the target audience. You did a great job of hooking the audience with this creative introduction. Great flow.
*~Big Nash~* - Ya word choices were very highly favorable.. You were very creative in your writing and used a solid structure and held up the finale of this writing
kinda lazy.....^^^ what i thought