Illyness v.s The Hit Squad
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King Cobra
Exact
Illyness v.s The Hit Squad
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Check by: Friday 4th November; 11.59pm
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250 posts to vote.
PE|WV
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King Cobra, I thought your rhymes were supposed to be poison,
But I wince at your loss column because your verses are plain annoying,
Half your members are just plain illiterate,
Where's your hypothesis? This crew is an experiment,
Expicitot? This bitch desperately needs a dictionary,
Becuase this fool clucked more than birds in an aviary,
Ante up King Cobra, or you're booted out the door..............
It's impossible for this kid to elevate,
........................His elevator doesn't reach the top floor
I guess he was blind the the challenges he was about to undergo,
His crew is amatuer, because it was started three days ago,
Illyness is the truth, and that's a dope diagnostic,
Because I need to break this rap down into an accrostic
Intermediate is the level that you need to advance to,
Losing is the only opportunity that I'll give you a chance to,
Leader isn't your title, I'm casting you away like sin
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Losing this bitch like a fad and setting a new trend.
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Exact lets battle ill show you some real rhymes that are exact
nice drop exact....it wasnt OD, but nice creativity at the end....once the other dude drop i will peep this again
NCred aka Cyrious
YO iight this will be an easy defeat,
cuz this guy only "cums" hard when he beats his meat,
my words would put u in the room of emergency,
take ur heart and ur pride like a surgery,
dont worry ima heal u like ur rhymes................. "nursery",
So ur girls literally wears the "pants in the house" cuz u cant afford clothes,
think u nice cuz u in crews that nobody knows,wat are u ass poor loz,
u have a good rec cuz all u do is battle noobs from LateKnightRyder 2 t29000,Originally Posted by ?Loz?
cuz if i were 2 rate u from 0-10 it would of be by the 0.thousandths
this cat flithy opposite of clean,
only time this cat spits fresh is when he spits out listerine,
u aint nice so realize that, cuz ill make u like "farve" and put 4 on ur back,
f..it ill put more holes on u then 50 cent,
how is it that ur crew got 1 dick and 3 pussies and still practices abstinence
fuck u all ur punches they jus filler,
so jus call me thekiller,
fuck quater nobody cares about that nig,
thats why even his crew member wrote his name wrong in his old sig.
jus realize ur wack exact, cuz u being in a good crew is wat u lack,
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nice verse to both....cant vote obviously....but good battle
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Exact-Your verse was more or less basic. In terms of Punches i feel u lacked intensity with them..and although ya font was a different look, ya lines were kinda off an on length wise..but on the other hand, i did feel the flow and all of the personals..and the creativty at the end wit the accrostic thing was preety dope too...i dont kno if u put the last liine of ya verse in a whole new post on purpose..but seeing as u put no explanation as to why, i considered it an intentional action...and i found that creative as well...good job overall, but punches and wurd play would have made it all the more doper.
Kobra- You had sum good punches here and there, which is good...and ya personals were on point..but not extreme....i feel that ya flow wasnt on point consistnatly and ya structure was all over the place due to the quotes...preperation of ya verse is realy a key factor when u kno that ur gonna b putting in links, quotes, etc. The thing that killed it for ya verse was all the talk about the gunplay and puttin 4 in his back like Favre... i mean dont get me wrong..it was a hot punch, but save it for a murder track, not a internet battle...feel me.. no hard feelings but the more creativy and style u have...the more unique and doper u become...nice drop overall..but get rid of the murder lyrics...or at least put "LYRICALLY" in front of those type of lines..
vote goes to Exact for above explanations
NCred aka Cyrious
NCred aka Cyrious
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good verses form both of ya....
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uppin to get closed..................................
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