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  1. November 14th, 2005, 06:12 PM #1
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    Sexual Lust(Him/Her) Ft. Miss Clitoria Cummings

    First verse is her from his point........and second verse is him from her point

    HIM

    Every time I see you, cant help but get wet
    just wanna take you in the room and make u sweat
    This feeling seems so new But all I wanna do is you...
    ...I wanna have my way with you And have some fun
    make you want me til you have no choice to cum
    I sat you down on the edge of the bed
    edged my self closer to you and said
    I wanna lick your lips, neck and ears
    And work my way down below your waist, ya hear?
    I backed off, an said do you mind if I have a taste?
    shook your head and licked your lips,...................
    .......................OMG! the expression on your face
    unbuckled your belt and then removed your top
    lower'd ya pants An underneath you were hard as a rock
    started teasing u with my tongue.........................
    ............................I started sucking on your penis
    wisper'd something im my ear i said do u really mean it?
    came in my mouth, swallowed it all It tastes so great
    make no mistake this must be fate
    You grabbed my waist, And laid me down
    smile an whispered, what goes around ,comes around
    with warmth I looked deep into your eyes
    While your tongue slid between my thighs
    Then you kissed my clit an teased me just a bit
    thoughts threw my mind,..."this dudes the shit!''
    I was goin crazy, O! was I goin insane
    My body started to tingle and tighten....
    .........................The moment I came
    I got off the bed, tied you too the head board
    I started grinding on you............................
    .......................Making you scream OH LORD!
    You start'd to moan an slight whisper I'm cumming
    I'm almost there, I vigerously started pumping
    You say, "this isn't fair" But then I untied you......
    ...........Just so you can have just one last thrust
    And at that moment you truly felt my sexual lust

    HER
    I'm sittin cakin with you,ready for later on
    In the words of Marvin Gaye...................
    .........................................Lets get it on
    I know you ready for my.........sexual lust
    Tonight is perfect,......so fuckin is a must
    I see you starin medown.......lickin ya lips
    And at the same time............................
    ..................I'm think bout grabbin ya hips
    You movin legs up and down, ready 2 get it
    I whisper in your ear tellin u.....................
    .................................I'm ready to get in it
    You gave me a smirk and unzipped my pants
    I felt your lips and tounge doing a nasty dance
    You came up slowly...............Lickin your lips
    Before I knew it, my head was between ya hips
    Givin you slow licks, diggin deeper as I go low
    Like Omarion all you was saying was.........O
    You put the strap on me, tellin me to go hard
    Its only been a few strokes..........................
    .............................I hear you go oh my gawd*
    But I kept pushing......as u pullin me in deeper
    Shawty was getting dirty like a street sweeper
    But at the moment I didn't want to let go, u did
    At the moment I felt cum, and was like aw shit
    But at the Climax.............I didn't want to bust
    But thats what happens................................
    ............................When you have sexual lust
    * gawd = god


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  2. November 14th, 2005, 06:24 PM #2
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    liked it didnt have the best flow i would work on dat but the ryme schme was pretty ill sounded like that shit ladie streetz did early u inspired? anway overall it was good keep dropin
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  3. November 14th, 2005, 06:29 PM #3
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    Quote Originally Posted by pyro2472
    liked it didnt have the best flow i would work on dat but the ryme schme was pretty ill sounded like that shit ladie streetz did early u inspired? anway overall it was good keep dropin
    Something like that. Thanks tho
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  4. November 14th, 2005, 07:02 PM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by pyro2472
    liked it didnt have the best flow i would work on dat but the ryme schme was pretty ill sounded like that shit ladie streetz did early u inspired? anway overall it was good keep dropin

    ummmmmmmm......... ........read better.................lol
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  5. November 14th, 2005, 07:17 PM #5
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    ok atleast yall stayed on topic it nice name of the song next time ill say try 2 do a maximum of 17lines it will be better nice drop on both heres yall feedback
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  6. November 14th, 2005, 07:17 PM #6
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    rhyme sceme 'n structure was good but it was basic...put vocab in it 'n detail ya shit u can do better....

    5/10
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  7. November 14th, 2005, 07:23 PM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tru$t
    rhyme sceme 'n structure was good but it was basic...put vocab in it 'n detail ya shit u can do better....

    5/10
    why do pplz always say that,......do u kno a peice can be hot with no rhyming at all,.............open mic is OPEN,........ever hear real OM poems ect?
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  8. November 14th, 2005, 07:41 PM #8
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    philly, that's why there's a section called poems. I suppose this section doesn't have the rules of a normal real life open mic, so in these types of Open Mics it's not going to be hot unless it's complex and/or rhymes extremely well...it was basic, face it.
    Topical me.
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  9. November 14th, 2005, 08:41 PM #9
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    structure was cool........ flow wfell off at some places. work on the rhyme shceme and it would be some cool shit. also needs a little vocab, other wise... dizzope
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    peep that nmutherfucker philly n' clit
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  11. November 14th, 2005, 09:01 PM #11
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    Woah sis can rhyme freaky. Good verse you lil'freak!

    You gave me a smirk and unzipped my pants
    I felt your lips and tounge doing a nasty dance
    ^ lmao ..... pimp
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    This joint was alright...I mean it was kind of like a remake of streetz and shellz sex...or whatever the name of it was...

    the flow and structure was dope and what not but the vocab was basic...but the imagery was on point...I almost had a hard on...almost...almost...

    I guess it was close to dope but not quite I felt it could have been done better on both verses but theres always room for improvement unless ur just completely dope...Keep droppin cuz I did like it don't get me wrong its just the concept was kinda played and I think a fwe things could have been done better...
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    Quote Originally Posted by QueenStyle
    Woah sis can rhyme freaky. Good verse you lil'freak!

    You gave me a smirk and unzipped my pants
    I felt your lips and tounge doing a nasty dance
    ^ lmao ..... pimp
    lmao....*can't say anything*

    Def, I feel you. I wanted to write something sexy.
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  14. November 14th, 2005, 09:12 PM #14
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    Nice both were killer drops.
    I'll be looking for future releases from all of you in the future.
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  15. November 15th, 2005, 10:48 AM #15
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    thx for the feedback yall,.........uppin for more feed
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