u cant try and convince people that i aint beat u to get a vote...dat can be a dq betta be careful...but anywayz uppin #3
lifestyl
lyrical aszaszin
u cant try and convince people that i aint beat u to get a vote...dat can be a dq betta be careful...but anywayz uppin #3
ooo my dad i aint no i did uppin again
its coo damn lets go...uppin #4 lets get this damn thing closed..quick
personnels-none
punches-tie
flow life
entertainment-lyrical
v/lyrical its was an ok battle
vote on ma battles they need voting and i have a battle but i havent put it on ma sig yet so please much appreciated
Look battlin me is not an easy adventaure ya need ta set sail and embark
The thong line is played so ima just say ya all ass like free from 106 and park
--ok-- 5/10
Ima shark............ or basically i guess ya could just call me a man eater
How ya gonna beat me when im a dolla and you spare change like a parkin meter
--nice-- 5.5/10
Lyrical Aszaszin you are not your more like a fuckin lyrical joker
Dis nigga is spittin lies hes fuckin worst den a real estate broker
--ok-- 4.5/10
So see im pointin out his flaws and i can tell hes actin like mathew perry
And you a flip flop sayin you tellin da truth but really lyin like john kerry *
--hmm-- 4/10
So basically dis was to easy beatin dis wannabe hitman
I spit to fuckin sick before ya accepted ya shoulda did da vrius scan
--Oooo-- 6/10
25/50
yo u could tell dis nigga gay claimin he a man eata/
betta pay ur dues cuz time jus ran up on this parkin meta/
--good-- 6/10
yo dis guy claimin he gangsta, das a load of bullshit/
u aint da man of da house wen ur momz got u pussy whipped/
-nah- 4/10
nigga i spit quick ima bomb fuse youz a candle wick/
like dynamite kid watchout i explode wit hot shit/
-tight- 6.5/10
ur punch lines used on the e-net for punching pra-ct-ice/
all beat up and shit, u might win usin an al-i-as/
--ok-- 4.5/10
nigga my punch lines hit leavin ur head spinnin clockwise/
down for da 10 count leave u layin flat like the horize-/
--ok-- 4.5/10
on & on im rippin dis nigga,leavin him wit bullet holes n his dome/
to tell u the truth u'd be betta off if u had jus left me alone/
--yep-- 5.5/10
31/60
DAMN CLOSE
V//Lyrcial BY 1 o__o
Holla Back..... I got battles.
coo....good shit lets go uppin #5...and yo lifestyl good shit obviously people think this was close...nice battle homie...no hate
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Life
-Work on ya structure and more creative punches and personals, ya lines are too stretched and weak at that, focus on witty punches and lines cuz without'em you'll lose, keep ya syllable count as equal as possible for each line......it'll make ya structure perfect overall 4.0 because of played and weak lines
LA
-Seen betta from ya homie..........same as Life you just came more direct and harder with your lines, but your creativity level was bout the same as his......just a lil more advance ya kno.....work on ya syllable count also overall 6.0 for come'n harder
v-LA
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
not much to say except for ^^^^^^^Originally Posted by Game-ova
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