Is It real

[Guess Who]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248604
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...82#post3442182



Chorus:
Dudes sellin dummies dont know how coke fill
SO i got one question is your coke real
Dudes sellin dummies dont know how coke fill
SO i got one question is your coke real
Dudes sellin dummies dont know how coke fill
SO i got one question is your coke real


i cant really tell but your shit might be rocks/
so i gotta check on that shit like nike socks/
all i do in the hood is bake K's...thats why my
shit sells in the hood like fake flays/
feds no i'm in the hood sellin so i keep low/
thats why my nick name mr whistle cuz i keep blow/
niggaz tryin to find out when I'm makin dat shipment
so in da back off the fed-ex i keep that equipment/

Chorus:
Dudes sellin dummies dont know how coke fill
SO i got one question is your coke real
Dudes sellin dummies dont know how coke fill
SO i got one question is your coke real
Dudes sellin dummies dont know how coke fill
SO i got one question is your coke real

Dudes no i'm servin shit that numb the top of ya mouth/
servin to the whole va at the top of the south/
if you thinkin bout sellin dummies ya might as well quit/
cuz my shit is more realler than the shit that i spit
i'm not gone huslt for a nigga when his weight too small/
i no a couple of them dudes but i'm not gone tell it all/

[Tryumph]

could use a lil work but overall i like it..and the idea..reminds me of the clipse...

[EyeBite]

this was iight you could elevate on better rhymes scheme..way too simple...extend ya varieties of rhymes dont use the same once a lot....topic was iight.....this drop was jus aiight nuthin big..overall thiswas like a 6.5/10..jus keep elevating..peace

[Duval]

What on earth??

This is not good. You need to elevate. Elevate your structure. Your rhymes need elevating. Just about everything needs elevatin. PM me for tips

[Guess Who]

uppin

[Johnny 6-feet]

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