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Thread: Angel eyes, Devilish Intentions. By Def Reapper and Miss Clit

  1. November 12th, 2005, 11:49 PM #16
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    The Final Chapter is taking over yo...I'm Liking this. THe imagery is decent the rhyme scheme I'm loving it, Miss. Your emotion was good, The flow was alright, I didnt' like the spacing out, kills the flow. But good drop by you miss none the less. Def you came nice also I'm liking your word choices, imagery was decent. Complex. Nice balance of vocab.

    Nice collab, keep dropping.

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  2. November 13th, 2005, 08:26 AM #17
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    this is a pretty dope piece all in all...had nice imagery and rhymes from both.. i thought the second verse flow was consistant yet a little basic..apart from the Turn Around stanza, which was more expanded...very nice overall structure..and emotions was sure in there...clit could do with adding in sum multies next time to expand the flow....


    nice drop from both still..as it worked well together..

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  3. November 13th, 2005, 12:03 PM #18
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  4. November 13th, 2005, 04:13 PM #19
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    Upping for more dope comments on this dopeness that we so dopely dropped...


    ok ok its not that dope but leave us some feed
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  5. November 13th, 2005, 08:02 PM #20
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  7. November 14th, 2005, 02:58 PM #22
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  8. November 14th, 2005, 07:53 PM #23
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  9. November 15th, 2005, 04:30 PM #24
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  10. November 16th, 2005, 04:04 AM #25
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    the structure was diff nd it is good. the title of da song is quite gud cause it sumarises wht is in da song. the flow was gud 2. the subject was interestin too. overall 9/10. frm me. kepp up da gu wrk
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  11. November 16th, 2005, 06:32 AM #26
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    Quote Originally Posted by kmazhvtk
    the structure was diff nd it is good. the title of da song is quite gud cause it sumarises wht is in da song. the flow was gud 2. the subject was interestin too. overall 9/10. frm me. kepp up da gu wrk
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  12. November 16th, 2005, 10:21 AM #27
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    Def you were ok... that's all... Clit, you have a nice flow with this one... good structure... nice scheme... I think this could've been hotter though... oh well that's just me... what do I know...














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  13. November 16th, 2005, 09:06 PM #28
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