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    dreadedfistofthenorthwest
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    Prophet Wisdom

    Rappers get sketchy, when they see me walk near em,
    I Break Motherfuckers down like a truth serum,
    I dont fear em, an why they spit, when i cant hear em,
    Prophest emcee shakin down to lowest points,
    hoist up the cup, when I wreck these old joints, (reffering to beats)
    Break up the sufficient, nuclear transmissions,
    Ill spit a full clip, and leave you just insufficient,
    I have my raps fully mapped out you crapped out,
    and after the battle, my strategics leave you blacked out,
    act out, like the fight scenes in the plays,
    Improvise the lines, in the mysterious of ways,
    rays from my brain kick pain in your frame,
    I bring praise and braid the days into night shades,
    My body is combined in a lethal mixture,
    half man, half mic, spittin lethal scriptures,
    fixture, the picture and shift your entire optic,
    take the object, money, and blow it out your pockets,
    rocket the rhymes into an inclined position,
    take the scalpel and scalp you with deep insisions,
    precision aim, some known to call me a sniper,
    unrational rappers, learnin from the pied piper,
    Im tighter, and poetic thought when i become the writer,
    You wanna peep the skill, come and crash the cypher,
    I call my brother son, just cause he shines like one,
    2 combined in mind, so now reveal what prophets done,
    take the topic, twist the top kid, aint know way to stop it,
    14 years old, and since birth ive been a prospect,
    ever since i came across wit the concept, Ive been a socket to,
    connect the bolts, watch the jolts between electric volts.

    Pretty rusty havent written or spit in a long time so bear with me. ahah leave some feed.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...53#post3478953

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...00#post3479000
    Last edited by -IsIs-; November 23rd, 2005 at 06:04 PM

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    uppin for some feedback people.

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    it was tight man very fuckin good for 14!!!

    ixture, the picture and shift your entire optic,
    take the object, money, and blow it out your pockets,

    ^^fav line i hope to see u drop more

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    uppin for some decent feedback people.

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    aight i quite liked this, there were times when i felt the flow go off and thr rhyme scheme change all of a sudden, but overall it's good and if that's rusty then you gotta be quite good
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    dreadedfistofthenorthwest
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    thanks for the feedback.
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    I really enjoyed the flow in this piece...It connected in every catagory. Creativity ran rampid throughout the piece...This was a decent read and well worth the time to look at...You got skills I give you that much. And if you were rusty here...I look forward to seeing your future work. So much flow and Connection I can't get over it...Good work...

    *~Big Nash~*

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    Yeah overall I liked the creativity of this piece. There were som hot rhymes thoughout your scheme. The flow was on point IMO. Structure was good. Overall I think was pretty good. Some lines could be improved but thats okay. Pretty consistent.

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    jake
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    ..I Like The Rhyme Scheme in This, but I felt The Bars were alot Little Short
    ..So That Kinda Fucked Up your flow a Little, but The Rest was very Nice
    ..The Vocab Was Ver Esr=tablished For 14, keep Droppin.....1

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    Good vocabulary, but it's always good to work on that. The flow was precise. Instead of readin it I was rapping it. My room mate looked at me like an idiot, but he left so it's all good. Hah.

    Dope lines:
    I Break Motherfuckers down like a truth serum,

    act out, like the fight scenes in the plays,
    Improvise the lines, in the mysterious of ways,

    My body is combined in a lethal mixture,
    half man, half mic, spittin lethal scriptures,

    fixture, the picture and shift your entire optic,
    take the object, money, and blow it out your pockets,

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    This Shit Was Hot, Nice Flow ect. You Had Good Multis And Shit Like That
    Not To Long For You To Lose Interset Or Nothing Like That
    Also It Was On Point Wich Is Always A Plus
    This Shit Was Nice
    Overall

    8.7/10


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    yea thanks for that feed man.
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    This was alright, I mean the rhyme scheme was basic, and predictable...you need to throw those mutlies in a lot more...but its not like it didn't rhyme at all which is good...it was a different topic but had some self-glory in It(I saw it don't lie nig )
    Nice overall but I think you could do better...not out of assumption but the simple fact that you said u haven't spit in a while

    So cheers and continue to elevate and better urself...pz nig
    Death to All Comers..

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