Renegade. (2-0) vs Macabre (2-0)

[Vaskez]

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
^^ok
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
^^heh not bad
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
^^meh, ok
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
^^heh, ok
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
^^lol
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
^^cool concept, coulda been used better
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
^^lol this is one of those where I say "why didn't I think of that?" not bad
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
^^heh ok
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
^^not bad
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
^^yeah yeah ok I spose
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
^^simple
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
^^heh
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
^^ok

vs.


Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
^^cool concept, didnt like the wording
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
^^ren/stimpy was used in LLL few weeks ago, so only ok
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
^^haha not bad
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
^^coo simile
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
^^heh ok
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
^^heh, ok
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
^^heh fair point I spose
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
^^wordplay not logically linked in well, but creative
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
^^hah, ok
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
^^lol, corny fat diss, but funny
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
^^pretty coo
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
^^hahaha
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
^^heh, dunno about the biter part, but he is tryina fit into LLL, true




Honestly, I think Ren came consistently ok, but Mac kinda killed this one using his greater experience in battling.

v/Mac


vote on mine dudes

[Lyrical God]

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Na
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Lol nice
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Haha good
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
Ok...
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Lol decent
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Lmao dope
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
Na
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
Ok
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Decent i guess
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
Nice
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Ok
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
Decent
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
Na..

Ren you had a consistant verse, with a couple of dope punches. There were very little weak punches, although i did think your finisher was quite dissapointing.

Vs.

Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
Decent
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Ok
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
Na..
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Lol good
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Lol decent
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
Haha true
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
blah...
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
simple but ok i guess
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
Lol good
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Nah...
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Nah...
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
LMAO DOPE
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
Decent finisher

Again a consistant verse, you also had some dope bars and also you had a lot of witty and creative puns in there. I was Lmao at the olympics concept.



Alright, this was damn close, i had 2 read em both over agen to decide. Both had your dope punches and creative lines. But im goin with mac because of a couple of his punches that just made me laugh for ages. Rens verse also had sum witty lines, but mac more so. So...

Vote/Mac

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Cool Drop Mac

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[B.I.Detained.]

See as though its a long ass battle, I thought I'd break it down
bit by bit.

Renegade:

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
eh, not for me.
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
ok, just not harsh enough.
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Noooo.
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
lol, cheesy but yea.
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
good idea, but dissing his hair?
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
good idea again, but forced as hell
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
nah, c'mon Ren' step it up from here
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
ok
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
getting better
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
creative, cool.
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
I chuckled lol[/b]
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
lmao, I thought it was just my school haha
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
aight, good idea

Macabre:

Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
ok
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
ok, again. Seen a stimpy line.
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
nah, poker lines?
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Lol, you seem to work well with aids punches, funny.
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
ok, flipped well
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
ok nameplay
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
true, not funny though
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
cheesey lol, funny.
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
LOL, good one.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
nah
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
good wordplay, weak punch
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Noooo.. I cringed.
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
Bland.

Overall:
Really tough. Still not sure who's won when I'm writing this.
Renegades verse took a long time to get going and to me
he had the funniest punch of the match with the 5 second
rule punch. But there was a lot of inconsistent punches which
just didn't hit at all. Where as Mac had like one really good
punch and then a bunch of consistent average punches.
Agh, I still don't know but I have to give a reason..
& this time its gonna be consistency. Soo. .

Vote:Macabre

Props for showing and making an interesting battle.

[>Inertia>]

Good battle man. Gave me a good run for my money.

[Keyser]

Renegade:

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
(no kinda suprised by this below par opener aswell)
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
(lol this was decent but couldo f been stronger)
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
(nope)
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
(lol funny ren)
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
(meh not feelin this)
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
(lol decent, but not hard enough)
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
(no)
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
(no)
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
(yeah nice punch)
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
(yeah pretty good ren, kinda sick of these anagrams and backward punches tho)
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
(meh it was ok)
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
(lol, best punch so far)
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
(yeah decent closer ren)

Macabre:

Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
(meh not bad)
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
(decent i guess)
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
(played, not feeling it)
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
(good mac)
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
(nice punch well worded)
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
(decent)
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
(not really)
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
(lol nice)
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
(cool punch)
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
(meh not really mac)
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
(poor punch but well done on the wordplay)
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
(alrite)
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
(meh, could of had a stronger closer)


Overall.....Good battle guys you came real nice at times, ren you was more funny than hard hitting here, and inconsistent at times....mac your verse was similar in quality, good verse on the whole more consistency and puches that hit harder than ren, but one of the better battles this week, good job guys, close battle, mac just edged it.

V/Mac

[Mr. Write]

Renegade:

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
-meh

Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
-decent

You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
-nah

That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
-no.

Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
-decent

Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
-good

Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
-aiight

First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
-aiight

Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
-decent

Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
-decent...its hella creative but the setup was fucked and stretched

Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
-aiight

Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
-niiice

I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
-not bad

Macabre:

Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
-decent

I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
-decent

You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
-pretty good

My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
-coo

Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
-not bad

And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
-decent

Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
-meh

And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
-nice lol

Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
-LMAO sickk

Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
-coo

Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
-okish

Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
-aiight

And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
-meh

this battle was hella close, you both had some lines i didnt like and some lines i liked a lot. Ren's best line was the 5 second rule and mac's best line was the IP address lol. Overall i think Mac edged it with slightly more consistancy.

v/ Mac

[Untold.]

worth the fucking read...

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
..lol. good opener..
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
..pretty good..
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
..meh. aight..
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
..lol. good..
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
..lol. good concept..
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
..funny..
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
..aiight..
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
..lol. aight..
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
..lol..
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
..pretty good..
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
..aiight..
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
..lmao. dope..
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
..pretty good closer..

vs.

Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
..lol. pretty good opener..
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
..lol. good..
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
..lol. real good..
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
..lol, 'nother good one..
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
..aiight..
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
..meh, ok..
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
..yea, fair i guess..
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
..aiight, maybe better wording..
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
..hah. pretty good..
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
..yea, good..
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
..lol. dope..
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
..nice..
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
..aiight..

well, this battle was pretty close for the fact both dropped real dope verses. ren came with alot of nice lines and consistency. he had witty punches, good set ups, nice structure, great presonals and he held his own in the battle. mac, he came out good as well. opener was aiight, but the rest of the lines were kill'n this. mac had good lines, with consistency as well. good punch after good punch. mac basically did his thing and came hard. after reading and breaking this battle down, i think that ren just edged it. good job to both.

v/ renegade.

[Tony Brown]

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
lmao
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
lmao even more
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
nah
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
meh
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Dayum!
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
good but seems like the wording was off
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
no
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
not bad
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Pretty good
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
your get extra points for including me in that 10 lol
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
this one made me chuckle
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
ajfo;iehdf Roflolmao, ok i know ppl say lol n lmao n shit but this one literally mad me lmao
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
meh

dope verse, i mean renegade kinda had an unfair advantage though cuz he had a pic to work with lol




Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
decent
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Good concept, needs better wording
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
This is played but not so much, good punch i suppose
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Rofl
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Ok not bad
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
Ha!
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
na
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Nice wordplay
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
Played mayne
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Haha
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
another dope punch
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
na, not feelin this
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
i don't know if this is true or not so.......?

ok i thought renegade has this one won for sure but you dropped hard as well
seems like you were kinda meh at the beginning then really picked it up at the end.




That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death

Vs

My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.

Nice battle, battle of the week most likely
I got Rene takin this one but just barely
V/ Renegade

[Arch]

That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
lol nice opener
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
lol yup
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
nope, not liking this
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
lmao, nice
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
nah i didnt like this, was weak imo
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
lmao funny personal
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
ok-ish nothing special,
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
aight but no hard punch
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
ok
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
yep i liked this one, good idea
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
lol ok, wouldnt say its 'good' but was funny
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
i dont get this?
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
okish but kinda weak for ur closer, didnt par with most of ur other lines.

V

Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
this was an aight personal opener
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
naw i dont like it, weak
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
lol nice, decent
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
this was aight, but no hard punch
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
ok again but no hard punch
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
nah weak
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
haha, very true. funny
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
didnt get it first time, but it was aight after a 2nd read.
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
lol funny, aight
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
this was aight. not great but aight
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
lmao, nice
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
ok
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
aight closer

This was a dope as fuck battle. And if it isnt battle of the week ill be very surprised. Both came really good but to me Ren was slightly more consistent with the harder punches. Both were humorous but Rens verse just made me laugh more and say "oooh".

V/ Ren for more consistency as u can see in my line breakdown, and a more humorous verse with some decent personals.
But both came dope fo real.

[Piff Jones]

Mac:
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.


Zaed:
And ya'll better joke.......when ya going with that joker Aes
Coz cards aside, i fill your head with holes..
..................................and i don't even gotta poker face

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showpos...466&postcount=4

It's a completely different concept, but same wordplay.

Anyway I'll break this down.

Renegade:
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death

Macabre:
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.


V/ Renegade. Great punches but Mac had that Poker line and.............

Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.

^that is feeding. Good battle though.

[Philly B. Sparkz]

5-4!

[>Inertia>]

hmm suspicious oh well

[Philly®]

this to close, i'll edit this post later with feedback & a vote perhaps

[Nib Oswald]

I smell a battle of the week.

Renegade:
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death

Consistently strong lines throughout and some nice multi-rhyming in the second half of your verse. Although witty, I thought that waaay too much of your drop was based on the visual gags, reflecting laziness concept-wise. Plenty of great lines, though.


Macabre:
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath? I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.

Lovely punning as usual, but your drop was much less consistent than Ren's with some bland lines between the gems. Also, two 'Ade' jokes was overkill... not to mention all those 'fareal's. Very close battle, but although Mac's good punches outdid Ren's good punches, Ren's verse was more solid overall.

Vote: Renegade