-|Hatred Intertwined|-

[Cody Nash]

Ya ya...blah blah blah...Good feed please..

[steveontrial]

flows a little off, put some multis in there and this could be good. keep tryin n shit.

[Cody Nash]

Thanks Steve...Bump~

[Young_Chopper317]

this my type of flo right he it was deep the structure was goo metaphors was right it was very creative overall 10/10 keep it up

[Cody Nash]

Thanks...Bump~

[Cody Nash]

Upp 4 Feed..................Bleh Don't sleep on this?

[Cody Nash]

Sleepers...Blah...

[MADDUS]

its hot, one of the best ive read so far,had a easy flow to it the
first section was real smooth,

I'm Feeding off bleeding hatred as if I'm dead,
The people are sayin' that it's all in my head,
Tactics like evil, spilling only blood of the red,
Test the limit and die without words being said,

nice, i think errything was on point, like concept ill
word play ight but you didnt need it, emotion more third person
rhyme scheme and structure was tight, only thing you might wanna
add is vocab...but like i said one of the gud ones in hurr
keep em commin peace

[Legacy01]

Yeh , wus feelin this quite a bit. Tha flow i figured was pretty tight n tha wordplay was good. The topic was aight, i didn't really feel much emotion on this but the imagery was gettin there and backed it up. Keep it up
~1~

[tecneek]

it was tight there was somthin about it
that kept me readin
it was tight

[Cody Nash]

Don't sleep, get to readin' bitches ^^Thanks people

[Cody Nash]

Bump~

[Cody Nash]

Bump Bump Bump Bump!

[Cody Nash]

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[Cody Nash]

Dayum the sleepers............