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    Flamin Massacre

    aiight well dis wuz supposed 2 be part of an audio collab but my comp went screwy so iss jus gon b text 4 now

    So dis is how it starts, take u back 2 tha beginning/
    Kiss tha sunlight goodbye cuz ur hopes'll be dimming/
    Keep ya mental chained up, I'm a verbal lock n key/
    Hit me wit lightnin verses, u still ain't shockin me/
    Michael row ya boat ashore, dun got no chance in dis game/
    If ya heard I wuz a loser musta heard me minamed/
    Leave ya fightin wit my ocean of deep n heavy punches/
    You back bitin dumb habits like bulimics missin lunches/
    Got you up n packin like tha brown box store/
    My words are like meth, u'll be back 4 more/
    Strika ya demolition, u can't get a demo listen/
    Othas knock ya flows n u accuse of pessimism/
    Punch buttons wit each sentence like jailers hurt jackets/
    U may arrive in one piece but u leave in a casket/
    Veins only cold when I leave you frozen at tha mic/
    Admit ur failure now before u deep in dis fight/
    I'm destroyin ya reputation like George W/
    Ain't deployin tha nation but I'll still trouble u/

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    yeah u know how much I like dis shit mama... good shit my fav lines

    Strika ya demolition, u can't get a demo listen/
    Othas knock ya flows n u accuse of pessimism/


    So dis is how it starts, take u back 2 tha beginning/
    Kiss tha sunlight goodbye cuz ur hopes'll be dimming/
    Keep ya mental chained up, I'm a verbal lock n key/
    Hit me wit lightnin verses, u still ain't shockin me/

    yea but tha line i aint like wuz tha last two bars ur closer gotta be sum knockout shit nice opener thoo

    imagery- iight
    vocab- jus a lil low
    punches- other then tha ones i mentioned decent

    keep doin wut u do

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    hey, yip I'm on this site too...I loved this one, though it was short. The ending was nice, never wouldve thought of it. Great work with this one...

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    thanx, uppin

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    uppin feed

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    okbut short.
    elevate please.

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    ma i feel u cud do a lot better.....the punches came aiight. flow cool. gotta fix ya wordplay mami.

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    thanx neways, uppin

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    shawty, i kno you can do better then this...jus up ya vocab, try n get a crazy ass topic that original, so people will feel ya flow, anyway decent ish ma' stay up.
    Yadadamean?

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    aiight yeah it ain't my best, my "dun hate tha femcee" is a lot betta, dis wuz jus a quick thing I made 2 do on audio

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    good shit son, could use a lil elevation but not so much as to where it throw's your style off. keep it real. peace

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    son???? lol

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