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Thread: i lost my mind

  1. #1
    PACO
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    i lost my mind

    this somethin i just thought about so give me some feedback
    or suggestions

    i know you heard my style drivin all the girls wild/
    like the couples grindin on the floor tile/
    you know i'm the illest nigga out fo the game/
    the reallist nigga out to entertain/
    i don't care critize all you want it just makes me stronger in the mind/
    i'll say things that will make you wanna rewind/
    and hear it again and again/
    i know you ain't my friend so why you gotta pretend/
    i know i should think before i say shit that i don't intend/
    fuck it i'll say whatever i feel like i should say/
    i must be a bad influence on kids cus parents make them stay away/
    you know kids don't listen to moms and dads when they should/
    they live in the hood and i know they wouldn't even if they could/
    nigga you don't know i don't think you understand me fully/
    look at me i'm just tryna be an emcee/
    you don't know what i'm been through i'm sick of hearin lies it gives fuel/
    to turn into somebody cruel like those freaks that drool/
    the mic is my tool i turn into somebody new my split personality/
    it could be dangerous it's my brains fatality/
    i'm like dr. jackyl and mr. hied that's a good example for a skitzo/
    it must of been all my anger buildin up from livin in the ghetto/
    i kept it all bottled inside it must of over filled now i'm about to explode/
    cus all my anger and pain put me in kill mode/
    if i hear one wrong word i'll ty to ignore it like it never occured/
    but if you keep goin i'll blow up on what i heard/
    i'ma eplode like a fuckin grenade cus you know i'm a renegade/
    so stay away until my anger fades/

  2. #2
    AngelicSheShe
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    It was pretty decent. good word play OoNnEe

  3. #3
    PACO
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    this is my third ryhme on this site thanx
    still uppin

  4. #4
    PACO
    Guest
    uppin

  5. #5
    Atetrack define'
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    much much better then the first spit i saw paco,very nice indeed,keep elevating constantly...nice spit
    bismillah

  6. #6
    PACO
    Guest
    thnx still uppin

  7. #7
    InFiNiTe_22
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    it was aight, betta then anythin i herd frum u, it seems like ur improvin as u write keep postin, i wanna hea more from u, peacz out

  8. #8
    PACO
    Guest
    a'ight thnx still uppin

  9. #9
    PACO
    Guest
    uppin

  10. #10
    Newbie ecentialcypha215's Avatar
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    it was tight dawg good word play work on the flow
    im not criticizin cause i know my shit aint down pat yet
    but practice makes perfect
    all been through the same insane shit a chain of predicaments
    boys that bonded whiles ago but yo we been stickin since
    for instances even through all the fights and the differences
    we still remained as tight as a white knuckle fuckin fist can get! (me)

  11. #11
    PACO
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    thnx dawg uppin

  12. #12
    LunkHead
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    nice drop. good wordplay but flow was a lil choppy. still real nice. keep spittin...

  13. #13
    I.TWriter
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    yo paco would it be cool if you and me do a i lost my mid pt 4
    hit me up on beware of the boys

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