Chain Letter (ft. Tim, Deviate and Percept)

[big j da fat boy]

yo this was a nice no a great peice. an who said real rappers use lyrics that every one understands. you just an illiterate asshole who's just pissed cause he cant understand it. an i know of a rapper who uses vocab like that in all his rymes his name is atmosphere look him up if you dont beleive me. but you guys did ya thang so keep at it. dont stop usin ya vocab cause illiterates cant read it they should get out they dictionaries so they can understand the words. but much love peace out

[Tim]

word thanxs uppin

[Plexus]

very nice from all of you

Johnny your flow was amazing never once missing a beat....the multies made it jus roll off the tongue perfectly...and it wasnt to complex and it wasnt to simple...dope....percept yours was dope as well..flow was very consistent and multies were good as well...only thing about your verse is i think itll be a lil to complex for less experianced people but other then that dope......deviate twas dope as well...very consistent flow and multies were nice as well..but yours also was proly a lil to complex for the less experianced readers as well but dope...and tim very dope...flow rolled very nice and vocab was nice as well...not to simple or not to complex...dope

very good piece and keep it up


please leave feed on my OM thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=263498

[Philly®]

this was a very dope piece i like'd how you all did a chain letter as your OM, all of it had flow but deviate line structure was lil off... it was to out of place which coulda made the flow better. it was very creative....the imagery was very good and i liked all of your parts of the chain letter. each of you use very creative words and put good thought into what you wrote....vocab was superb.....this is HOF material

[topher]

Beautiful piece guys.Johnny you always seem to have those smooth and nice multies and flow i always seem to look forward too.I never see you lose that.The way the story line you all guys used was amazing.It was a very easy read by which i mean it was fun and exciting.The vocab was cool,and pretty good.The verse Deviate had was incredible as well as always i see.His verse was a bit more complex and creative.Tim you had a good verse as well.I have seen better though but this is a recent collab you guys have done so it was pretty good,considering i havent seen you done any collabs in a while.

Pz.


Please check "Cursed."

[Diamond Mind]

DOPE, lol, thats the only word i need to use to describe this piece,

everyone killed it,
and i've come to expect this from everyone on the piece,
good flow, great structure and was jus good all round

keep doing ur things

[Cody Nash]

Dope peice. Flowed easy...had a combination of experienced people in it... and some well played out verses. One of the better peices of the site...It was nice as fuck. Good job Tim, Percept, Johnny, and the other dudes...It was a nice/good read and had some dope content.

~Nash

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