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  1. January 14th, 2006, 02:09 PM #1
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    I Spit For...

    I spit for..

    the same lil cats holdin sacks and they torches lit
    same cats that turn they front porches to fortresses
    for the kid with a dream to escape the hoods course and shit
    for the girl with no worldly choice but to abort that kid
    for the young bucks on the come up, stay holdin chins to god
    for the kid doin drive bys, scared as he spins the ride
    for the kids hearin and doin what we say when we spit on the mic
    for the kids yellin at they selves, but dont know how or when to cry
    for the wrongly accused shootas facin at leest 10 to life
    paroles not comin, .... youll see sunlight when you die
    for the kid on the bus with a pen and a pad
    for the kid on the corner, dont know which mens his dad
    for the mother of a g, worryed bout her son
    for the kid who stares at the barrel and doubts the gun
    i got you like sonny and cher, ill see you when you get scared
    for my deceased homeys, ill see you when i get there

    I spit for you
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  2. January 14th, 2006, 02:13 PM #2
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    i replyed to Racism and Fallen Apart
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  3. January 14th, 2006, 03:08 PM #3
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    IS IT TOO FUCKIN MUCH?

    to ask for 1 fuckin reply???
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  4. January 14th, 2006, 03:24 PM #4
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    yo mang ... i liked this a lot. i felt it, the whole way through. nicely done for sure
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    "one life, one love, so there can only be one King."
    -Nas

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  5. January 14th, 2006, 03:26 PM #5
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    yea yea...



    anyway

    can i get some real feedback and shit?
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  6. January 14th, 2006, 03:27 PM #6
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    This wasnt a poem, obviously, it was a freestlye, rap, whatever you'd call it. The flow was phat, the multies, that was pretty much the only good thing in this peice, the concept, topic, the way you explained everything was alright, structure was fine. Keep it up, youll do good if you keep writing. Looking forward to seeing more from you in the future.
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  7. January 14th, 2006, 03:30 PM #7
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    ...damn, why the fuck ppl keep thinkin im new here or summin, i been here since 2002... shit


    o yea, preciate the feedback

    i see what i gotta do now... i gotta win a tourney or 6
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  8. January 14th, 2006, 03:30 PM #8
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    Quote Originally Posted by OutWrite
    yea yea...



    anyway

    can i get some real feedback and shit?

    a thanks woulda been just fine bitch. dont think youre better than you are.
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  9. January 14th, 2006, 03:32 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by OutWrite
    ...damn, why the fuck ppl keep thinkin im new here or summin, i been here since 2002... shit


    o yea, preciate the feedback

    i see what i gotta do now... i gotta win a tourney or 6
    I dont think your new. You just suck.

    And 02? No. 03 according to the join date.
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  10. January 14th, 2006, 03:33 PM #10
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    dawg both yall niggas is wak battle and get torn up
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  11. January 14th, 2006, 03:38 PM #11
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    *ahem*

    dont twist nothin up... just cuz this membership is 03... you what fuck that

    i dont think im better than i am, im just better than you

    b-nug and shit, what kinda fuckin name is b-nug?

    po', you is eddy?
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  12. January 14th, 2006, 03:44 PM #12
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    Eddy, no. Im not. And your not better than me. Not even close to my level.

    Im done, dont wanna freepost in your thread, peace.
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  13. January 14th, 2006, 03:48 PM #13
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    muthafuck my thread, i could give a fuck less, my hit would get spins, your topical shit would get published, id be on TV, youd be on someones coffee table



    peace
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  14. January 14th, 2006, 04:59 PM #14
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    lmao at you saying youd get your hit played. yet you've been on the net for 3-4 years, adn have not even elevated towards audio, along with at least a decent text piece. you ryhmed iwth too simple words, and the multies werent there. flow was good. keep writing. elevation is key
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  15. January 14th, 2006, 05:45 PM #15
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    yo mang ... i liked this a lot. i felt it, the whole way through. nicely done for sure
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