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    Mothers tears.

    Mothers Tears.

    Sucidal thoughts filling her head her brain cells are functioning pain.
    as she watches her son slowly injecting crack needles threw his veins.
    she cant belive what she has 2 do 2 survive, prostitution for a doller.
    N' its hard 2 see her daughter havin unagreeable sex with her father.
    everyday she's recive'ing a different gift from the devil as a present.
    dating a alcholic, son is a fean the oxgen shes breathin is unpleasant.
    shes living in a deadly house so she uses blood as her only oentment.
    everyday she looks in the mirror N' she sees nothing but disapointment.
    laughter from evil, whispers from hell reveal's itself inside her hatred head.
    and its hard getting help from her parent's when both of them are dead.
    makin da wrong move she falls in the arms of demons N' gives them a kiss.
    ''her mind changes as her daughter walks in catchin her cutting her wrist.
    good thoughts are coming out her system god's hope are easily washing.
    while she thinks theres nothing to live for sucide is her only N' best option.
    trying 2 help but knowing he can't stop its too late her son is addicted.
    and she hasn't pay her payments to the devil N' now her life is evicted.
    as she falls alsleep that night with bruises and pain all over her face.
    nextday she wakes up in the world she wanted to be in, in the first place.
    If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.

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    iight i was feelin this its tru though thts what most moms go trough u kno like it was sic its like comin from tha eyse of tha mother

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    uppin. thankz
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    Waddup evil.It's me,God's Deciple,Plain-Thug.

    Well ok piece man.I believe you just started rtight?It's pretty good for someone who just started.I read it and the way you execuetd the storyline was good.You just got to go a different direction in using it.Make it something that no one will predict'll happen.Once you do that you should add more multies,more than 2 syllables so it'll be better.But i want to see you elevate by your self to see what kind of development style you'll have.


    Pz,also join my crew,Oh Word?
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    YOU GRASP REALITY BY THE BALLS AND THEN TWIST THE SACK HARD! your attack on this topic couldnt be more accurate. the emmotion and delivery made this peace above average and to write on this suject is not easy but you made it seam so.......great work hit me up for collab sometime.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    thankz uppin.
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