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  1. January 23rd, 2006, 03:10 PM #1
    LyricallyInclined
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    So Many....

    -INTRO-
    yeah....let me tell you a few things about me...my feelings...
    ...some of my life....my story.....my testemony

    -HOOK-
    so many obsticales, so many things is possable
    his love for us truly unstoppable
    so many people are touched every single day
    i've been blessed in so many ways
    -VERSE 1-
    12 years old...feelin so bold, nothin to charish or hold
    thinkin god & the bible was anouther story everyone knows
    stayin on the streets by myself all alone at night
    didn't belive in miricals and didnt wanna see the light
    got put in a group home..........in a small town
    went to they church never smiled there was always a frown
    3 months later...........i was back on the streets
    seen my best friend die...said lord why me...i'ma "g"
    13 years old now in buckhorn wilderness program
    didnt have church so nobody tryed to take the spiritual stand
    some things happened while i was there...it's too personal
    the staff didnt belive the thought what i said was questional
    hiked from tennessee all the way back to kentucky
    got to go home, but i refused, really i was lucky
    i had never gotten through anything that took will-power
    ....and i was known to be be a religious coward

    -HOOK-
    so many obsticales, so many things is possable
    his love for us truly unstoppable
    so many people are touched every single day
    i've been blessed in so many ways

    -VERSE 2-
    look into my eyes.....you'll see much pain
    turn to him you got nothin to lose but so much to gain
    you hear all these words thats comin through ya speakaz
    they aint mine they comin from our lord, the father of jesus
    before i lay my head down to get some rest
    i thank god for him leavin me so...................blessed
    i have the talent to write these raps
    i only have him to thank for that
    listen closely...before you approach me
    dont come at me with that shit cause i'm not foney
    if you would have come at me with that about 7 months ago
    i most likely wouldnt have said no
    listen to everyone of the 42 bars that i done spit
    theres so many teens blessed with kids
    so many people have undesired weddeins
    turn to him.....just ask......and you'll recive a blessin'

    -HOOK-
    so many obsticales, so many things is possable
    his love for us truly unstoppable
    so many people are touched every single day
    i've been blessed in so many ways



    its on some spiritual shit so what i thought it was a good idea, yeah i'm goin a lil spiritual in my raps gotta problem with it? If so, get over it


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    ...Confuzed & Complicated...
    Last edited by LyricallyInclined; January 24th, 2006 at 08:53 PM
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  2. January 23rd, 2006, 03:15 PM #2
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    this shit is hot im'a give you 2 thumbs up nigga
    yo you whent hard on this one
    i like your songs then your battles
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  3. January 23rd, 2006, 04:15 PM #3
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    yeah well i battled your alias and won plus you shouldnt vote for yourself
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  4. January 23rd, 2006, 10:54 PM #4
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    uppin for more feed
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  5. January 23rd, 2006, 11:15 PM #5
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    12 years old...feelin so bold, nothin to charish or hold

    If you reworded this to "12 years old...feeling so bold, nothing to charish, nothing to hold.

    That flows a little better. You showed alot of emotion, i liked this one better than your other one.
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  6. January 24th, 2006, 01:11 AM #6
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    i thought it was good, it had a personal meaningful message i just thought the rhymes were a little basic in the first verse, the 2nd one def more complex. the intro and the hook is straight too.
    keep up the good work tho
    the line between emcee and comedian gets a little thinner
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  7. January 24th, 2006, 01:59 PM #7
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    thanx for all the feed but im uppin this for more feed
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  8. January 24th, 2006, 02:01 PM #8
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    niceish drop
    sum gd emotion
    flow ws gd
    structure ws gd
    rhymin ws gd
    keep at it, this ws a gd piece
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  9. January 24th, 2006, 04:13 PM #9
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  10. January 24th, 2006, 04:17 PM #10
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    this was nice here. i like the message dat was being givin out. very nice lyrical. keep doin u
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  11. January 24th, 2006, 04:31 PM #11
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    thanx and i will dont worry
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  12. January 24th, 2006, 04:39 PM #12
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    this was a good drop, i liked the fact that you'd let your life leak into your rhymes and not have any regrets. i do think the chorus or hook was kinda corney, but mabye its because the way you flow it isnt the way that i flow it, overall really good, 1st verse was good, second verse was a lil shakey but i still liked it...

    keep doin ya thing homie...
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  13. January 24th, 2006, 04:43 PM #13
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  14. January 24th, 2006, 05:26 PM #14
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    Good drop, decent topic, good use of vocabs really aint feel your flow, but you still did good. Keep it up
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