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  1. January 27th, 2006, 04:41 PM #1
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    Haters

    I try not to make a scene but my anger takes control
    When i get angry my mind is like a black hole..........
    I can't take this shit and now i get treated like a criminal
    but to me i'm original with a bad ass temper with no minimal
    Haters can hate but they aint gonna stop till i react..
    thats why i stay gun packed and i sit back and relax...
    With no fuckin care for haters and especially these cats
    they just pussy wanna bes...now every nigga is tauntin me
    wantin me to kill em' or start a fight and start a riot..
    they say shit but i deny it and everyone else dont buy it
    dont they know i connections and i'm well respected...
    Dont worry i'll fight back when they least expect it.....

    haters are no good and haters dont act hood.........
    If i cant verbally get em back then physically sure would
    I got all these weapons and have one on me every day
    and once a stike dem haterz they gonna stay away

    haters dont know me good only know i'm a good rapper
    got hot lyrics and hot drops in the past and thats true
    and if they start shit wit me, i'll walk away and say fuck you
    I could pop at them a few times i could do that too....
    But i rather stick to non violence like a tattoo...........
    but sumday that wont happen cuz its shit too
    I'll shoot dem one day with my loaded pistol..............
    i'll pop a few or maybe a lot..or maybe just a fistfull..
    So haters know now not to fuckin skribble for real...
    I aint a punk i drive good behind da wheel and dont steel
    so cops on my side too so i got connections with them too
    I'm even friends with eminem so back the fuck away fools
    Haters gonna die soon and i aint gonna wait............
    When i kill dem that day will be so fuckin great

    (chorus x2)
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  2. January 27th, 2006, 04:48 PM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=266769
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  3. January 27th, 2006, 06:59 PM #3
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    uppin 4 feed...........
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  4. January 27th, 2006, 09:16 PM #4
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    yo this piece was good, not ur best tho. topic was a lil played but thats ok..flowed good, vocab was good, structure was good, all u really lacked was creativity, other than that i liked this, keep it up
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  5. January 28th, 2006, 09:25 PM #5
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    ok......thanks for the feed...uppin 4 more..plz levae feed and leave linkz i'll get to them as soon as possible.
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  6. January 29th, 2006, 12:33 PM #6
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    i liked diz. it was hot doe. i kno what u sayin doe. i relate alot to diz shit especially in the first verse doe. datz me all day but you picked a hot topic well.. alot of muafuckaz pick diz topic but you put effort into diz

    hot shit
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  7. January 29th, 2006, 12:50 PM #7
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    Decent piece.Played topic.Also the storyline was too basic,I've seen you before and your work,but the only problem is you should think of a different direction of writing the topic.Instead of writing something people''ll predict,dont something they cant.Than that'll be good.Also use multies with double syllables,or make them match up to each other.

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  8. January 29th, 2006, 12:57 PM #8
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    thanks for the feed....very appreciated..uppin 4 more
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  9. January 29th, 2006, 02:27 PM #9
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    nice flow structure///layout... concept was uhm ok if... vocab cudda been a lil sharper..style was nice still
    just needed a few mo elements thrown in 4 good measure
    smooth tecnique tho

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268515
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  10. January 29th, 2006, 07:03 PM #10
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    I think this was alright, but I have definately read better.

    The topic isn't a good pick as there is only so much to say about it. I think it shows a bit from what you've written.

    It just seems a bit tired...

    Think you could flourish with a better topic from what I have seen from you before...
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  11. January 29th, 2006, 08:43 PM #11
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    this was a good one , not the best tho but still it was hot, nice flow and structure there
    but the vocab could be lil better
    nice verse tho
    keep up
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  12. January 29th, 2006, 11:18 PM #12
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    man i luv when skribble does om's...he knows his shit

    this one was good, i liked the flow it had, des rymes were better than most of ur other om's ive seen, good job man, another hit
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  13. January 30th, 2006, 12:31 AM #13
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    Actually, this shit wasnt bad. I expected some lame ass lyrics to a lame ass song, but the lyrics werent that awful. In fact, u had some alright lines here.. flow was a little off, but that just comes with practice. Put this shit in audio, if u do, and hit me up when ur done, i'd like to hear it. Keep it up.
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  14. January 30th, 2006, 03:32 PM #14
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    thanks for the feed everyone....uppin 4 more
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  15. January 30th, 2006, 03:54 PM #15
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    Not really feelin disz . Stuck to the topic but it wasn't talkin about shit really ..

    haters dont know me good only know i'm a good rapper
    got hot lyrics and hot drops in the past and thats true
    and if they start shit wit me, i'll walk away and say fuck you
    that shit was horrible .
    other shit was okay but, you defenitely amatuer
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