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Thread: These Days

  1. February 7th, 2006, 02:06 PM #1
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    These Days

    These days.

    There has never been a second of my life I have forgot
    The dreaded guilt hits, as a wasted life rots
    Days fly by like a steam train with no breaks
    Even if you don't wait, everything is ALWAYS too late
    From someone close to heart dead or an excited kids gaze
    In a phase of "worst nightmares" change their ways to "good days"
    It seems I’m just a hastily burning out match, yet an egg awaiting hatch
    Trapped in a room, impossible to find the exiting latch

    Times ticking as my life’s full of leaks
    As years turn to months and months turn to weeks

    I try to catch every breath
    And ignore the feeling of death

    Times ticking as I’m lost in this maze,
    As months turn to weeks...And weeks turn to days

    Life isn’t about being cool
    If you do, you’re only a fool

    Time ticks as life’s hit and miss, like a game of poker impossible to win-it
    As days turn to hours and hours turn to minutes

    Stop to think ... and try to wait
    Cause life is to short for making mistakes

    I never wait, i've always tried to play it cool
    N I make mistakes so that makes me a fool

    Then ...

    Suddenly memories fall into place, and my life seems so long
    And as the minutes turn to seconds...Everything’s gone

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    Last edited by Bow Bitches.; February 8th, 2006 at 03:16 PM
    Move on , no irony here.
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  2. February 7th, 2006, 05:07 PM #2
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    ummm this thread was looking kindah dead so im just going to go on and say something flow was okay and i thought this shit was hot but the thing about it was the spaces i felt you didnt really need to space the shit out tho you had good grammer use & tahts what brought the topic out from this
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  3. February 7th, 2006, 06:54 PM #3
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    Thanks up... lazy whores.
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  4. February 8th, 2006, 11:32 AM #4
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  5. February 8th, 2006, 03:16 PM #5
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  6. February 8th, 2006, 03:53 PM #6
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    Life isn’t about being cool
    If you do, you’re only a fool

    WHAT THE FUCK??

    lol, this piece could use improvemen, but it is still good, i could see this sint your best wrok though. good job good topic, the first stanza was good, and the structure was creative, the ending was pretty cool as well

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  7. February 8th, 2006, 03:56 PM #7
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    good shit man keep it up but sum shit made no sense or i didnt read it rite o well good shit tho
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  8. February 8th, 2006, 06:36 PM #8
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    Up again fffsssss!
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  9. February 8th, 2006, 08:46 PM #9
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    it was alright nothing really stood out doe it was a iight verse but it wasnt very captivating but good flow iight i give it a 5/10
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  10. February 9th, 2006, 10:38 AM #10
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  11. February 10th, 2006, 03:38 PM #11
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    tight song, needs a lil work but its tight
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  12. February 10th, 2006, 03:42 PM #12
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    Life isn’t about being cool
    If you do, you’re only a fool

    AHHHHHHH, LOL!!!!

    this piece could use nit of improvement, but it is still ok, i could see this isnt your best work. good job good topic, the first stanza was good, and the structure was creative, the ending was pretty cool as well

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  13. February 10th, 2006, 04:06 PM #13
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    Quote Originally Posted by seige
    Life isn’t about being cool
    If you do, you’re only a fool

    WHAT THE FUCK??

    lol, this piece could use improvemen, but it is still good, i could see this sint your best wrok though. good job good topic, the first stanza was good, and the structure was creative, the ending was pretty cool as well

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    Quote Originally Posted by Artist
    Life isn’t about being cool
    If you do, you’re only a fool

    AHHHHHHH, LOL!!!!

    this piece could use nit of improvement, but it is still ok, i could see this isnt your best work. good job good topic, the first stanza was good, and the structure was creative, the ending was pretty cool as well

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  14. February 10th, 2006, 04:08 PM #14
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    Give some decent feedback or ill report.
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