10 lines
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Check in hoe
Artifact
Schizmatic
10 lines
Due in 2 hours
Check in hoe
Checkity check... ill drop soon
Good luck...
wtf is with the 100 character thing? used to be 50...
Who knows
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each pic of him is a different black guy...lol the fuck?
and he's from England...keep that in mind...
ya got more fake pics than I could fuckin rope with a lasso
shit u got so many faces....it's like you were drawn by Picasso
i admit, ur words do phase me, but i ain't tryina' say i suck
you got me not thinkin straight ONLY cuz your gay as fuck
english queer, we aint friends, its different here, fuk it dude
yeah u would wanna be my mate so it sounds like im fuckin you
anyways, im straight up starvin, and subway sounds the bomb
while thats my favourite place to eat, ur subways are getin bombed
you ugly fuck, ur PATHETIC, girls dont give a shit dude
even called urself Artifact, and chicks STILL dont dig you
nice verse
I liked the last punch... The rest was oksy but blah.
I'll vote when art posts his verse.
...
AI
“¡Viva la Revolución!”
Goddamn atleast try to make them niggas you cope the pics from look alike....
Lol... that guys name is ArtiFAKE... that aint me & they aint my pics..
Good verse though...
Your like twisted-rapists, coz bitch-your-hated
Your punches like ‘out of place bones’ – theres no ‘diss-located’
Dudes failin to punch, its like i severed-his-thumbs
‘Schiz’ is the exception to the phrase ‘2 minds’ are better-than-one
Your too simple... my deepest valleys the same-as-your-summit
Plus, your punches seem 'ab-sent' like they ‘came-from-ya-stomach’
Schiz couldnt flow-with-pride, and face it, you know-inside
That 'bein on dicks' is the only way you could claim 'homo-side' (homicide)
You think your raps-are-gold, ive got you crashin-though
Impaling-your-chest coz you fail-to-impress like fat chicks in fashion-shows
dont lie your him
up1
Up2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Holy fuck im the best person in frontlines obviously why arent you fuckers voting my battles
Would you rather prefer herb shti? the fuck
up3
ya got more fake pics than I could fuckin rope with a lasso
shit u got so many faces....it's like you were drawn by Picasso
LOL OK
i admit, ur words do phase me, but i ain't tryina' say i suck
you got me not thinkin straight ONLY cuz your gay as fuck
LOL NICE
english queer, we aint friends, its different here, fuk it dude
yeah u would wanna be my mate so it sounds like im fuckin you
DECENT
anyways, im straight up starvin, and subway sounds the bomb
while thats my favourite place to eat, ur subways are getin bombed
NAH
you ugly fuck, ur PATHETIC, girls dont give a shit dude
even called urself Artifact, and chicks STILL dont dig you
LOL OK
Overall not bad....just work on making all of your punches hit...I think you has one or two that you could have worded better and more adoper verse as a whole...good job tho...8/10
vs.
Your like twisted-rapists, coz bitch-your-hated
Your punches like ‘out of place bones’ – theres no ‘diss-located’
DECENT
Dudes failin to punch, its like i severed-his-thumbs
‘Schiz’ is the exception to the phrase ‘2 minds’ are better-than-one
BLAH...NO
Your too simple... my deepest valleys the same-as-your-summit
Plus, your punches seem 'ab-sent' like they ‘came-from-ya-stomach’
GAY SORRY
Schiz couldnt flow-with-pride, and face it, you know-inside
That 'bein on dicks' is the only way you could claim 'homo-side' (homicide)
GAY JOKES=PLAYED
You think your raps-are-gold, ive got you crashin-though
Impaling-your-chest coz you fail-to-impress like fat chicks in fashion-shows
BLAH...NO
Overall you hd maybe two decent punches...the rest was wack and very half-assed....try to not use parentheses, slashes, dots, tildes, commas,dashes,etc. in your verses...it looks gay and noobish...overall not very well put together....4/10
v/Schiz
i admit, ur words do phase me, but i ain't tryina' say i suck
you got me not thinkin straight ONLY cuz your gay as fuck
english queer, we aint friends, its different here, fuk it dude
yeah u would wanna be my mate so it sounds like im fuckin you
anyways, im straight up starvin, and subway sounds the bomb
while thats my favourite place to eat, ur subways are getin bombed
you ugly fuck, ur PATHETIC, girls dont give a shit dude
even called urself Artifact, and chicks STILL dont dig you
vs
Your like twisted-rapists, coz bitch-your-hated
Your punches like ‘out of place bones’ – theres no ‘diss-located’
^^dat was hott but dat was all u had
v/schiz...kind of eazy
ya got more fake pics than I could fuckin rope with a lasso
shit u got so many faces....it's like you were drawn by Picasso
i admit, ur words do phase me, but i ain't tryina' say i suck
you got me not thinkin straight ONLY cuz your gay as fuck
english queer, we aint friends, its different here, fuk it dude
yeah u would wanna be my mate so it sounds like im fuckin you
vs
Your like twisted-rapists, coz bitch-your-hated
Your punches like ‘out of place bones’ – theres no ‘diss-located’
ok battle but im a go wit schiz for having the better punches
artifact your verse was straight homie but you started to fall
after ya first punch elavate
v-schiz no hate
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I agree totally with this breakdown N i dont think much more is needed, self explanatory, shciz good shit, some spots were iffy but you pulled out, work on consistency. other homie artifact not a bad verse, but gay jokes R played unless executed properly, pretty consistent for the most part, but felt you could have done better. pz
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