yo i liked this peice. it had good flow an emotion in it. it was different i guess thats why it caught my eye. just keep at cause from what i read you got potential to do better. an i wouldn't mind readin more from you. so can you return the favor on my om in the air.
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this my boo.......guess who it is
thanx for the feed
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I got some shit on my chest that causes so musch stress
honestly i dont know why i think about it, i get in a mess
i have opinions but know one ever cares to listen
i can be a ass hole but only if im put in that position
my ambitions rise higher and higher as i let this pain go
i had a dream once about my death im gonna die slow
i often have conversations with myself, im goin insaine
i have so much to learn, knowledge is what i hope to gain
if i could take back my past i would do it in a nano second
lifes been nothin but painfull and i get drunk & high, so reckless
i cant pin point it exactly as i would like too i just wanna be alone
i cant stand it anymore i just wanna smash my cell phone
i get relentless call all day, i constantly arguee with myself
god shine your light on me please, because i think i need your help
DONT USE UP ALL YOUR TIGHT SHIT
TIGHT
what the fuck that aint feed thats just copying and pasting then typing some bull shit about dont use up all your tight shitOriginally Posted by ReKey
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uppin for feed
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uppin for some more feed
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flow was ok you could of used more meta4's and stuff to make it more intersting to read but overall i think it was preety wack. elevate and use your creativity and bigger vocab next time. That will help up the feed
i used a wide range vocabulary so what are you goin through and your the only person who said it was wack so wtf
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uppin for more feed
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uppin for more feedback
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i liked this ......8 outta 10 from me
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uppin for more feedback on my peice drop a link and ill leave feed on yours
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i lked tha flow + tha structure, nd could feel tha emotion. it was simple but stll wrkd out. lked ur wrk man keep it up nd keep it cmin.
thanx for feedback uppin for more
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this was tight niggah it braought alot to the table.. the vocab was tight the flow was tight.. well to me anyway even though im a newbie and not that hott yet i still know talent when i see it keep doin yo thing.
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