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Thread: Over You

  1. #1
    OPIE TAYLOR
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    Over You

    The Heart That I Gave For Ya Was More Than An Organ Dona
    So I Was Gonna Pour It Into The Form Of A Poem For Ya
    But Before I Know This Flow Exploded And So I
    Tore Up The Poem And Wrote A Whole Song Cus Whore
    Every Time I Hear The Radio And Our Song Is On It
    Its Like Alls Gone Wrong In My Stomach And I Wanna Vomit
    And Im Not Gonna Comment On How Long I Wanted
    To Bomb Ya Mama For Drama She Braught In Our Apartment
    It Didnt Take Much To Await The Day Of Our Brake Up
    Our First Date Sucked Same With The Way We'd Make Love
    And Every Day I Was Afraid To Wake Up To The Face Of A Fake Slut
    Who Cant Do Her Make Up I Was In Pain For Those 8 Months
    And Even If I Drank Me A Case Of Listerine
    It'd Never Erase The Sickening Taste Of You Kissin Me
    Cant Believe You Had Me Crushin To Ushers Box Set Its
    Like Now I Get A Rush From Flushin Your Cosmetics
    You Actin Like Im Damaged And Cant Manage Ya Dead Wrong
    It Aint Happenin Dammit Im A Man And Reds Strong
    I Took Matches To The Mattress We Slept On
    Now Its In Ashes Like Our Passion The Beds Gone
    So Get All Ya Clothes Get Out The Do Ya Got To Go
    And I Thought You Aught To Know When I Went Off And Ya Got Told
    You Were Hot As A Model, That Was All Cus I Got Aholdof Alot Of Those Bottles
    All Talk Of The Alcohol Ho Ya Not Hot At All Though
    Thought It Was Love But I Was Stupid It Was A Venomous Dart
    That Old Cupid Used For Shootin This Man In His Heart
    Another Night With You Hoggin The Covas Bitch
    Swear To God Ida Smothad Ya Quick And Stopped This Monogomist Lova Shit
    And Cus I Was Forced Wit No Option For So Long To Go Shoppin
    To Sit On The Sofa Watchin Those Soap Operas And
    Old Episodes Of The Oprah Show So Often
    You Were Close To Gettin Choked Off And Thrown In Your Own Closet
    Plus You Shoulda Been Catchin Mad Smackins And Ass Beatins
    At Least When I Ran Into U And My Man On That Weekend
    On The Back Street In The Lac Creepin
    Mackin On The Back Seat In The Act Cheatin
    But I Dont Live In The Past Ima Just Get Wit Ya Sista Quicka Than Fast
    Rip Ya Pictuas In Half Pitch Ya Shit In The Trash
    I Got A New Chick Ya Slip And Shes Kickin Ya Ass
    Maybe Thatll Get You To Quit Ya Bitchin At Last
    And Since Ya Skin Contaminated My Lettermans Jacket
    I Shredded The Bastard Like Ya Letters And That Shit
    With All Ya Non Stop Calls Ya Blow Up The Answer Machine
    Got Me Wantin To Beat You Down Wit Ya Cosmopolitan Magazine
    Cus Dont You Notice The Cold Shoulda Im Throwin You?
    But Knowin You You Need The Whole Ovaview Broken To You
    So Here We Go Throw On Ya Shoes Put Those Old Sodas To Use
    Theres No Growin Old Wit You Ho Im So Ova You!!!!!

  2. #2
    OPIE TAYLOR
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    I Had To Repost This Because Somehow It Got Locked On Closed Or Sumthin Hit Me Up Tell Me What You Think

  3. #3
    Aged Like Fine Wine
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    you need 2 links homie...after u get that i'll leave feed....

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    ..in chains? Naw!
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    You need to leave two links in here to pieces you
    have left quality feedback to. Or this will be closed.
    I'll give you another day. If not, THEN it will be closed.


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  5. #5
    OPIE TAYLOR
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    what does this two links thing mean?

    Just read the link that is provided. It will all be revealed.
    Last edited by B.I.Detained.; March 6th, 2006 at 02:06 PM

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  8. #8
    OPIE TAYLOR
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    now hit me up!

  9. #9
    dble-d
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    nice gal i wish to c ya drop using a M-I-C ok and i wanna chat wiz ya on da massenger i wish u read diz now

  10. #10
    yeh man das good especially bout da bit dat da girl screwed u over but like structure needs improvin thats only problem rest of it is good superb. dis is i think da best hook in it " And Even If I Drank Me A Case Of Listerine
    It'd Never Erase The Sickening Taste Of You Kissin Me" bascially dat means watever u did u cant get this girl out ur system deep words.

  11. #11
    OPIE TAYLOR
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    good lookin out yall

  12. #12
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
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    Umm this was cool for a new person to drop but not up to par to be honest just learn more about multi's and creativity thats what OM's are mostly revolved around so if you wish to write one in the future then be sure to have those aspects in your verse and imagination as well create a vivid image thats what makes OM's dope just elevate and try a new topic to bring out your best I'll give this a 5/10 just elevate~1~

  13. #13
    OPIE TAYLOR
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    Fuck I2

  14. #14
    OPIE TAYLOR
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    Or Glitch Who Ever You Are

  15. #15
    lyrical messiah
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    this was real nice. i liked how you turned the shit around on that hoe. it had emotion in it, that made it better for the reader to understand how you was feelin at the time. but peace out dawg

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